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233 Elysium

🕑 Added 2019-08-17 00:51:53 +0000 UTC

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František Novák

It may be just a minor thing, and he may get to that later too: Daniel hit a level cap, which may prove quite straining. Knowing him for those 200 chapters, he would invest the money he has into raising it. Or he may just consider the thought and select a better option like obtaining one space ship and teleport for elderfire. Someone may even come up with the idea of using donation system through the schemas video site to extend the level cap- "Sponsor Harbinger to defeat Elysium, join the War!". If the enemy hits many worlds with billions of citizens, and leaders are scared to take direct action, it creates quite the demand for protection - or revenge, and regular citizens do not have other ways of helping. Sponsorship from companies to gear up Harbinger´s Legion would be also possible. Those damn country bumpkins need the equipment.

Monsoon117

Of course, though you can't skip to a master level at something over a few hours.

Dominic French

The harbinger must be power leveling his mental abilities in the combat right?

Harb

No boom today ... Boom tomorrow

s476

Cheers!

Monsoon117

Thank you man. I always figured that OP was a misused concept in most RRL stories. I read them for years and always thought they pitted these god-like people against uneducated medieval peasants who had every disadvantage imaginable. The outcome is set, and there's so little going on. Why not have them face other gods in an arena fitting for them? That seemed to me like a missed opportunity. Of course keeping the characters human is also very important to me, but at the same time, let badasses be badass. It's really that simple.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Burninating the countryside, burninating the hybrids ... Harbingerrrrr!!!!!!

Backfire

Well said

Hana Buechel

So glad what you did with the chat with Tohtella. Well thought out and encaptured both characters ..well.. characters. One of the reasons this is my favorite story out there is by how you stick to a grey archetype. No one is fully right or wrong and the villains/insanity revolutionaries? Have their own goals, experiences and most importantly excuses. I feel when one makes excuses for their actions that’s when they’ve started on a misguided path. You make me what to know about all the characters you feature!! Absolutely awesome chapter and story!!

Backfire

Also typo: The odd sight caught me off guard, but Giess' wildlife was anything if (not) strange.

Backfire

I've read many OP story lines and truth be told, almost all of them bore me to death at this point. This is not one of those. The sheer scale of the story, the absolute epic visualizations of fights between bona fide demigods, the continuation of goals (Sovereign class, defeating Tohtella, eventually overcoming The System) have turned this into THE OP story line for me. It's like Dragon Ball Z on crack, except with much less filler and power backed by logic. Your story is an exemplar showcase of how to do OP right. Others might not share the same opinion as me, but this is mine. Keep on writing like a god my dude. Edit: Just to reiterate on my point of OP done right, you haven't written a story, make an even more OP character than intentional, and then nerf him back into the realm of the norm. You instead embraced it, merged him one with an armor made of the enemies he has sworn to kill, taken legendary skills and skill trees to eventually make him the god of character builds he was meant to be, and pitted him against enemies to match. That, my friend, is what I mean by OP done right

Monsoon117

Fixed and thanks.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Kevin Ramos

God I hope so

Overseer Sena

EXPLOSSIIIOOOONNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

Alex R

> Despite the doge, the implosion radiated out with devastation Should be "Despite the dodge"

Beeees!

Can’t wait for the next chapter: Big Boom

Alex R

Like usual, a great chapter.

Jonathan Walker

Fuck Yeahhhhh I can't wait for him to fuck them up lol

DeeSharkman

You spelled Lehesion as Lehesin where Daniel was talking about the Adairs turning him into a puppet if he joins

Thank for the chap

0x0F

It was a good chapter

Omega

Very good

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy the chapter. Let me know if there's a logical error or two here. There was a lot going on, and I might've missed something obvious.


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