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🕑 Added 2019-08-21 22:20:26 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Smith

Hey, Monsoon? I think you need to remove 'Harbringer of' from the mc's title. Just now, he WAS the Cataclysm, not just the Harbringer.

Shannon Smith

What's even more threatening is when he tells them he can do it AGAIN every 10 minutes.

alexander julian

Dude! That's exactly how I did it!😂

Alex R

It's about 5 chapters a month at minimum usually. Sometimes it's at 8 but usually 5ish. One a week or so.

Ilan

it's one chapter per week on average.

Gabe

I see Monsoon used to post more frequently than a week between chapters. I just started supporting his patreon after catching up to this post. Is he on vacation or something?

Idan tal

More pls!

Alex

Super ready for the next chapter ^_^

Gabe

Ohhh man. Just caught up to the latest chapter after bingeing the whole series. Now I have to suck it up and wait in unhealthy anticipation for each new installment! Thanks for the story, Monsoon. Absolutely loving it!

Monsoon117

It was underneath the city, so no one saw the portal. That's why they assumed it was a nuclear bomb.

OpCrystal

Something I kinda just thought of, wasn’t the sentinel’s portals supposed to be kept secret? I thought that was the point of coming into polydra from the wrong direction, to mislead them to where their base is. But if he just portals in like a wrecking ball... Totehlla’s a smart cookie she’ll put two and two together

Monsoon117

In this case, I'd consider it a consequence cliff. It's a generally solid, narratively fitting style of cliffhanger. It doesn't create a bunch of false assumptions or anything. It's more so enticing the reader with what the state of the story looks like after the dust settles.

Some BS Deity

Adair Family: We have resources, armies, and mind mages what threat are you Daniel: I simulate nukes by falling from stupid heights and Living. Adair Minion: Fuck that's actually threatening.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter.

M van Dongen

Blue Screen Cliff :/

FrostyFeet

Loved that eruption

s476

A joy to read. While I have.come to love the diplomacy as well, the very thing gripping me from the start are the awesome fights and descriptions. Thanks for the chapter!

Roderick McKinney

Thanks for the chapter Monsoon. Loved the hellscape you drew out as ground zero. Can't wait for more.

Monsoon117

I can just shift it a bit. The issue you're thinking of is word variety, and it's a completely viable thing to bring up.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Backfire

Awesome chapter, here’s a minor nitpick though. The flow of this paragraph felt a little awkward to me on account of the double use of “here”. ‘Even Hunter of Many failed me (here), the sheer volume of sound and rushing boulders too loud and too abundant to make out. My gravitational sense saved me (here), giving me a rough outline of my ever-shifting surroundings.’ Here’s an example of how I’d fix it (You don’t need to do this, just a suggestion). ‘Even Hunter of Many failed me here, the sheer volume of sound and rushing boulders too loud and too abundant to make out. My gravitational sense is what really shown through in this instance, giving me a rough outline of my ever-shifting surroundings.’

Kevin Ramos

"You are incapable of defeating me." One Pompaii later... "And yet you lost."

Jonathan Walker

Fucking hell yes, I can't wait to find out what happens next

Monsoon117

Also rectified.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Gam

I feel like I could fight a bear after reading that chapter.

Omega

Another: Both the dreadnought's shiels popped

Omega

Lil mistake: It should be plenty to cullPoldyra utterly, though."

Thanks for the chap. Where is kessiah and krog in the conversation? Also did daniel use the stored damage when he slammed v2.2’s torso?

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy. I got my adrenaline flowing while writing this chapter. Always a joy to write scenes of utter destruction.


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