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237 Tactics

🕑 Added 2019-09-24 19:31:09 +0000 UTC

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František Novák

It is true that a shield a size of small city should be noticeable in a few hours circling an orbit of planet. Also Daniel´s weight itself is easy to detect, even we humans use satelites to find small differences of gravity to pinpoint higher or lower density resources underground. Considering there is no t much clouds in deserts, a town should be easy to find from space. Schema´s system will probably give you information about teleports available on Giess somehow.

František Novák

Mr. Proper

Stepan Kadlec

I find a few things puzzling in the last chapters. From my understanding it seems that im a world with several ways how to enhance senses and flying battleships a city sized dome of mana/energy should be noticed. If the roots are there to prevent escapees/digging they probably also have some sensory abilities and could catch up on Daniel running around and setting mana bombs. I also had the feeling that the hybrids had mind controll network/failswitch. I would expect this to trigger alarms when one of them is killed. Did I just miss some part of the explanation? Does the blue core e.g. give some cloaking abilities that prevent the base being seen from orbit?

PloofDoodle

After cleaning a bunch of cities, Daniel should get the title "Janitor" or something along those lines.

Monsoon117

It's just something he didn't intuitively think. Also, spelling error fixed.

"Their metal frames let them run across the lake's bottom. This gave the monsters fantastic aquatic manuverability when you'd think they could hardly move." --maneuverability is spelt wrong and the second sentence doesn't make a lot is sense, why wouldn't we think they could run on the bottom?

Monsoon117

Yeah I could, and it sounds pretty fun. I can give it a shot once the story allows.

Bobby B.

Have you ever considered a Joe Smoe POV? Like, some rando that joined the guild for shits and gigs, not like the ginger super mage or..... shit the main mechanic guy, but some random ass, middle of the pack, just surviving, dude, trying to figure out engraving just enough to personalize his weapon. Or decide between a "blaster" or a sword. not some "my family's ancient sword techniques" or "assassin training" no, just like, a burger flipper who was considering joining the army for tuition assistance and lived by him(her)self with a cat/dog when the world decided to go and shit itself. TL:DR average joe POV to get a real feel for the new earth.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

He was working with the information he had. Daniel happen to know more about the battle just because he was there for the most part, and he used that information to his advantage.

Kristoffer

Thanks for the chapter!

Also since Torix should have already known from Daniel’s pov, that Daniel can make crystallised mana that Daniel uses for bombs, so shouldn’t Torix already have a plan made with that in mind along with other ways those crystals can be used?

Thank for the chapter. Since Torix watched Daniel’s pov last fight, shouldn’t he be the one to realise it first on how the Adair family places troops or at least Torix would react in a way that confirms Daniel’s theory like “so you also guess those spires will be there...”?

Gabe

Thank you for this. I'm dying for something to occupy my time while I wait for the new Cradle book on Thursday

Monsoon117

Easier said than done my friend.

s476

:)

Monsoon117

The average population dropped by a considerate amount due to how the tutorial takes place. The average age also dropped since elderly and out of shape people died at a much higher rate than fit, younger individuals. This void of experience and wisdom created a fallout of governmental structure that lead to more close knit, clan-like societies based on families and previous friendships. Over time, government like coalitions formed once more, with certain fragmented nations coming back to a certain extent. Portions of the globe experienced eldritch fallout, a common occurrence on newer worlds. When guilds are allowed onto the world, these eldritch spots will be cleared out for the price of cities, land, and access to dungeons. Depending on the contracts input, Earth could lose a lot of its autonomy in general. Earth's at the stage right before this, when the original factions have formed and are beginning to gain strength. I'll have all this elaborated on in more detail once Daniel has some time. I could always inject a timely POV as well for Hod or someone else who interacts with these psuedo governmental structures.

Omega

Thanks for the chapter, dailys would be much apprecieated.

Kevin Ramos

Nice. Off topic question and one you've probably answered already, what happened to the rest of the earth when it was integrated by the system?

This cliff... why u leave me on it?

Monsoon117

Let me know what you think as always. I'm warming back up to writing, locking in a consistent schedule, and getting comfortable with it again. It's like scrubbing away rust. Once it's gone, it was like it was never there. As I get rolling, I should get chapters out faster than this, but for now, I'm satisfied with my pace and the time invested. For now.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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