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238 Brimstone and Steel

🕑 Added 2019-09-28 19:40:00 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

It's not a strength thing. As long as he has portals to get through the aura an orbital bombardment will take Lehesion out. Its the fact that Lehesion is genuinely immortal

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help and fixed.

Chrome

Open wounds littered there frames. This should be their instead of there

Monsoon117

I don't really understand how a whitehole would form. It would have to be an antrigravitational force so strong, that not even light could enter the radius of it's Event Horizon. That seems impossible since it would disperse the energy and matter to an extent where it would no longer have that level of antigravitational pull. It's an interesting idea however. You could create anti-gravitational grenades that lob shrapnel at extreme speeds. Might just be sub-par grenades though.

Hamdi Korreshi

Are you ever going to have use a white hole? Considering he already uses black holes and that’s created by using gravity while holes can be created using antigravity. They can also be linked so the black hole absorbs the matter and the white hole launches the matter as super hot plasma. Just a thought other than that great chapter!

Some BS Deity

Nice chapter.

Monsoon117

I have a solution coming soon for forgetting skill names and characters.

Monsoon117

Yeah, I can do that. I have a few ideas for clever implementation of the idea as well, while making it relevant to the plot.

Monsoon117

I'll inject some more variety in the word choice with a focus on what you mentioned.

Krog: FUS ROH DAH

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Backfire

God damn there were some insane visuals this chapter. The perfect sphere of nothing in a ship before it all comes crashing down, the lake freezing with the wave, its just quality. Reminded me of Neil Stephenson somewhat, and that is high praise. My only gripe is that you used the word "as" frequently, but nowhere near the amount as some authors I read (Defiance of the Fall being the worst offender). Overall, just great stuff, and glad to see some more consistent updates.

Jonathan Walker

Hell yeah a fight to end all fights hopefully he is strong enough this time to destroy him completely

I really liked this chapter. That being said I am interested in a more tactical view of the battle. I know Daniel really wouldn't be the one to give us that overview but maybe a pov with Torix?

Adam Roundfield

Staycations are the best, just tell everybody you are on vacation, sever all communications... then do whatever you want.

s476

Epic chapter, you are completely right about the length ;)

Omega

I like, i like the consistant fast updates a lot more

Monsoon117

Daniel is stronger and knows how to break them.

Lancelot9402

Great Chapter, seems like the shields are weaker now than before.

Sebas Tian

This is what I imagine happing... Daniel basically funneling the full blast directly to himself, then laughing like a badass, then retaliating with that title/skill I forget the name off. But all power fantasy's aside great chapter xD.

Monsoon117

As always, let me know what you think about the chapter. This one's the right length in my opinion at 3,000 words. It's the right length for flow, tension, and content. You can dive in without having to want a subject change too quickly. Chapter length's aside, let me know if there's continuity errors or anything like that, and thanks for reading. It means a lot.


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