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242 A Nightmare, Manifested

🕑 Added 2019-10-13 00:56:44 +0000 UTC

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Freaking awesome. I'm stoked

13lack12ose

Yooooo, this is epic!

Yeah, Torix was starting to get less and less scary as Daniel got stronger. This chapter just completely changed my perception.

Shannon Smith

Could you have possibly made his rebirth sound more evil? Lol.

PloofDoodle

Mr. Tall Dark and Skelly is back in business.

Nakkus

Nice! Thanks for the chapter!

BrauBaer

Holy moly. That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Absolutely love this chapter. I had goosebumps the entire time Toros was giving his speech 10/10

if you take Marvel Comics' perspective, there is a single "god" particle and that is what determines what is regenerated, or you can take Brandon Sanderson's view in which the soul chooses the larger (vessel)body, or random if a perfect slice of both.

Idan tal

A small question I always have when it’s coming to regenerating immortality - if you take the remains and split them in two, which one will regenerate to the full being again?

tibbish

Being immune to disease isn't the same as being unaging or regening damage. Google the word scenescence if you want to know more about the biological process of aging but you're gonna get old n' die even if don't get sick or can heal broken bones.

Alex R

Doesnt lifespan increases not effect Daniel though? He is immune to poison, cancer, and other afflictions. And he has that monstrous regen that would fix the other internal issues that might crop up like heart disease, which is arguable if he still has one. Unless Schema has a killswitch built in.

Some BS Deity

Congrats torix now all shall know your power.

Scruffleupagas

Love it, can't wait to see what Torix does with this

Monsoon117

I could whip out some commissions at some point and see what happens.

Evanescence229

Is it possible to get an image of torix’s body at some point? Chapter was amazing.

Sean Ulrich

Was that a subtle Doctor Who reference? The Weeping Angels mayhaps?

Jason Smith

Another awesome chapter monsoon!

Sebastian Berobo

I was a bit confused about that aswell

What is Torix kneeling with if his body disintegrated beforehand?

Bobby B.

We need to get Torix a scythe!!

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help and fixed.

Monsoon117

Definitely. Thanks and fixed.

Hana Buechel

Absolutely awesome writing!! Love how You describe Torix. The sentence “This who Torix really was” should be said as “ This is who Torix really was”

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aGr90PBSSuk

Faruel

I think "the mere presence of it altered night to day." should be reversed to "the mere presence of it altered DAY to NIGHT."

Gamertecno

Now we need a pov chapter of how people react to an event that could be seen from orbit xD

Gamertecno

This was a damn good chapter and the whole time I was listening to this. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScP5Nv-EhZI

Lockwood

The end gave me chills. The best kind of chills. Well done Monsoon!

Jeremiah Paltridge

Badass. Seriously.

Jonathan

I think it's one per eldritch once it's over 1000. I don't remembering it scaling for 2000+ level eldritch, but it's been a long time since I read that chapter.

Jonathan

You had to ... sling into action?

Alex R

He has 4 life extending perks right, Endurance, Cons, Will, and Strength. Also is it for 1 year for each 1000+ leveled Eldritch or 1 year per 1000 levels of the eldritch.

Monsoon117

Sorry for the wait. My girlfriend recently dislocated her shoulder, and I've had to step up with my domestic duties. That and comforting, etc. I'm still feeling good about writing though, so hope you all enjoy the chapter.


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