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🕑 Added 2019-10-20 05:00:57 +0000 UTC

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Hello, first of all thank you for the all of the work. I have just started second read, something I do not do often. Your writing flows nicely and it is perfect for clearing my head. That being said, I did notice this during this second pass: In chapter 113 when Daniel and Torix meet Yawn in person for the first time, Yawn discussed the Cipher with Daniel quite openly. How did it pass that Torix with his extensive knowledge about magic & his previous study of his Son's (and Baldag-Ruhls) work did not put these pieces together? As I said I only noticed this while reading for the second time so its probably not a big deal.

Aguy

When will he become the [Harbinger of Apocalypse]?

František Novák

Are you having vacation or rewriting everything because of my comments in 240?

František Novák

I wonder if they share the info with other factions. Could bring huge favour from multiple ones.

13lack12ose

some big reveals in this one, plus a new class for our favourite skeleton!

Conor McGroarty

Even ignoring the philosophical question of whether an imperfect being can make a perfect one (or even whether a perfect being can make one), Schema is certainly not perfect (what even is the measure of perfection?). After all, it is all but certain that Schema is very inflexible likely due to being incapable of change (personal revision of its software I guess) or otherwise stubborn was coded. It makes me wonder whether the R and D revenants that designed and built it intended for him to be this way (or maybe it was just one jerk who thought it would be hilarious to screw over their own species) or something went wrong (like he was turned on before the software was fully made or maybe in debugging phase)and they weren’t able to finish.

Monsoon117

Yeah, creating a skill chart for multiple characters would be a massive time and energy sink. I personally don't think it would be worth as it would take 2-3 chapter's worth of work per character skill chart.

alexander julian

By the way what are everyone's legendary and mythical skills at this point again? I'm super out of wack with what they have. It'd be super cool if we had access to your skill layout thing tho I'd assume a limited version to allow for creative freedom on your part

alexander julian

Thing is with them is there not simply powerful. They transcend the fabric of space time. Even if he could he probably shouldn't

Wrath

Definitely appreciate the perspective change they really do help with progression and getting to know the character. The longer the story goes on the more it makes me wonder if he will be able to defeat an old God.

Monsoon117

I was getting nervous as I read this before ending it on a high note. Thank you, and I wanted Daniel to be someone who could relish in someone else's success. It's a sheer sign of maturity, and he has matured quite a bit since the story began.

Monsoon117

Intensity of the experience is a massive catalyst for learning quickly. Sitting in a cave and reading can't compare with applying skills in the field. It's like taking a guy with a teaching degree versus someone who's been teaching for four years. The actual teacher will no more due to the application of knowledge.

Monsoon117

Man I love that series. Torix is quite different from Sans, however. I can see the comparison though.

Mason Sudul

One of the things that usually ruins a story for me with an OP mc is the hyper scaling if his allies to match him. What this does instead is just making the mc no longer unique. You however managed to have almost all of his allies scale to insane levels while still maintaining Daniel's uniqueness and relative strength. It was handled masterfully and I applaud you, keep up the good work.

Gabriel

I really liked this chapter, made schema feel more real, less unfeeling and reflected that there is more going on a bigger scale than what we see.

Lockwood

Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to see what the end of the Archmage tree brings!

Ray Burns

Now that is exactly how I am going to imagine him. They both even have a crown thing going on.

Alex R

What did Torix need to do get that tree? And I guess I was expecting him to have more due to age and breadth of skills but he isnt a leveling monster like Daniel.

Alex R

That Torix tree looks great. And I like the way that you had them think about Schema's wrong doings.

Jonathan

Just imagine how bad Windows would operate if you couldn't bug-fix the new versions after they came out.

Laevus Deus

That was a great chapter.

Connor Alexander

Thanks so much for the chapter! Torix finally gets a taste of the true absurdity of Daniel, and its permanent too! Hope your missus gets back up to full health soon Monsoon.

Conor McGroarty

Schema isn’t perfect and that isn’t even taking into account the philosophical implications of “can an imperfect being make something perfect” or “what is the measure of perfection?” It would be more logical to compare Schema’s programming as sub-optimal (we aren’t even completely certain of whether Schema was purposely made this way by a genius and jerk revenant scientist on the team or whether this was a screw up with them putting in a bad code or Schema becoming online before they finished).

Does Torix pretty much look like mother of learning's Quatach-Ichl now?

s476

Thanks for the chapter! Its nice that torix got another power up.

Pranav

Overlord season 4 looking real nice

Hana Buechel

TY for chapter! Love the POVs. Appreciate the way info into the system and schema is given in deductions rather than confirmations. Keep the mystery while satisfying inquiries.

Omega

Now monsoon, i thought we were past this? Torix cupped his chin, "Hmm, perhaps your correct on that account. Is that the correct you're?

Omega

Thanks for the chapter, would love to see torixs reaction to daniels status

Monsoon117

Thanks man. That's always good to hear.

Alex

Absolutely killer 👌🏻😄

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

This chapter took a long time mainly due to the status involved. I'm still tanking the domestic duties of the household for now, but my GF is getting better pretty quickly. I've actually had the same kind of shoulder issues in the past, so I could help her out with what to do. It's been refreshing seeing her recovery outpace my own by leaps and bounds. That was a dark time in my life, so I'm grateful it didn't end up being as much of an ordeal for her as it was for me. Either way, hope you all enjoy the chapter.


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