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247 Obolis Novas

🕑 Added 2019-10-31 15:51:01 +0000 UTC

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The horrible sensation of reading something that is too good.

Monsoon117

Probably today. I got food poisoning, and it took me out for a solid four days. Besides for that, it took me longer to get back into the swing of things than expected. Sorry for the delay.

s476

Hey, I just wanted to ask if there is an ETA on the next chapter :)

Idan tal

248?

Bobby B.

This, was everything I had hoped for and more

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

alexander julian

I think its because his presence and personality is very clear

alexander julian

I kinda like that he hasn't and think he won't. His perception is crazy high for a reason

Idan tal

Yes! Now that’s a big badass boss! Somehow reminds me of the tree guy, but much more impressive

James Danger Latham

Epic, Awesome, and straight up badass. Im diggin it man, Im diggin it.

Connor Alexander

Oh my life this was awesome! Oblelis is looking the part of the Emperor of a multi-planetary empire. I can't wait to see how he's specced out - If he's willing to share

Alex

I'm upset, for I found your story. Im upset, that I started reading your story. Im upset, because I can't stop reading your story. 10/10 Always leaving more questions than answers, damn you thank you bless you.

s476

I love it and I already love the emperor!

Monsoon117

Yenno, I mentioned it having been a while since I posted twice in row. It's been far longer since I posted three days in a row. This chapter came as a surprise. With Obolis, I created a history and backlog of his experiences along with an outline of his characteristics. In that way, I understood who he was before he appeared in the story. This is different from my usual story of dropping them in and discovering who they are. It let me write this out without any real difficulty. If anything, it was very fun as I found myself immersed in the experience as I wrote it out. At the same time, my writing may have suffered since I was so invested in the scene. Details can often get lost in the big picture when the big picture is overwhelming. Regardless, let me know if you enjoyed it and the Emperor's introduction.


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