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251 General Understanding

🕑 Added 2019-12-01 01:07:00 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

I changed the costs at some point. I ended up underselling cores cost pretty heavily, and I went back and retconned this.

alexander julian

Also she can shape shift so both the forms are... Adjustable. I don't think they'll have a problem

František Novák

He has skill to reduce his body size + weight, from the titan tree unlocked by high constitution stat.

Stupid Question but, how can Daniel possible have sex with Altea when he double her height? Now it remember that comic about de female goblin and the male minotaur

František Novák

I find it a bit inconsistent, that the obelisk costs 300 000 credits. You mentioned before that guilds were exchanging 1 dungeon core for an obelisk, being a rip-off by the sellers. Also that red dungeon core, which is worth 10 normal cores, goes for 50-60 000 credits. On top of that, you mentioned Schema pushes prices down for new planets like Giess, so I would expect prices around 1000 credits for the cheapest version. I was long suspecting, that schema uses them as one of the main sources of power, since it took each persons % of manageneration. Damn AI probably surpassed distance limits with mana transfer to some extent. So spreading these not only spreads knowledge among people making them fight better, but also expands information network and provide energy. Dosnt make sense to fork out 6 red cores just for basic obelisk, people hunt in teams, clearing a dungeon, resting and healing can take a week for group of ten people. That means 10*6*7 = 420 days to get everyone an obelisk. Either there is another more important source of income, for like killing eldritch, or it may be clearing quests. If it is so hard to obtain these devices, people would use something like iPhone which is the last thing Schema needs - leting his soldiers keep the knowledge of advanced electronics leading eventualy to another uncontroled AI.

Shannon Smith

"I clanked my teeth together". Daniel's ready to eat a chunk of Old God, lol.

You doing good during this quarantine season, Monsoon? And thanks for the chapter!

He could have still killed the Eldritch around them with almost no effort, whether he approached them about it or not. Sure they would come back, but at least it would give them a short respite, maybe allow them to get ahead of things. Daniel is not big on altruism, but when it costs so little there I could not understand why he did not do it. Actually, it might even not cost him anything, since he would get a small amount of benefit out of it, and perhaps even a few years of life it any were over 1000.

Thank you for the clarifications Monsoon. Excited for the next chapter.

Monsoon117

I was just wanting to let oyu know why I'd be answering with multiple replies. I don't know how to control spacing with patreon comments, therefore, I end up with massive blocks of text that are arduous to read through.

Monsoon117

Ok, what did I miss...So in general, most of Daniel's knowledge was observational. A lot of this stuff would be learned by talking to the townsfolk rather than watching the, I'll also change the distance the towns were from Mt. Verner. The towns will be far away since that will make it so that the guild's influence won't be present. EDIT: I don't mind the questions at all. They show interest in the story, which is always nice to see. I was just letting you know why I'm answering with several replies.

I'm sorry for making it difficult to respond because of my questions

Monsoon117

Alright then awesome. Got confused there.

Monsoon117

I'll make this more clear in the chapter. Daniel wasn't visiting towns that already received his guild's help. Daniel knows that his guild's doing well. He was trying to get an unbiased perspective of what life was like for people that are just average. I explain in a comment earlier why Daniel didn't personally invite them. To put it simply, he's too threatening. I'll add in some explanation of the foreign scouts in the next chapter. This is difficult to respond to in a coordinated manner just because it's so many questions in a row, so my answer becomes a behemoth of text.

Monsoon117

Daniel is a monster that far exceeds what the eldritch are capable of below. It would be like Yawm walking up to Daniel at the start of the story and offering for him to join his guild. It would seem like a threat at best, even with good intentions. An intermediary that they can trust and relate too would far increase the chance of the villages accepting the guild's assistance, imo at least.

Zachary Smith

Sure did open up a can of worms about the town folk Monad

On that note, what are the scouts doing that they are unable to convince other towns to join the guild? I would imagine with the guild's advantages, they should have easily spread their influence. Probably under Torix's orders that the guild is under a passive stance towards interacting with other towns. Or what about the previous discovered foreign scouts that Torix talked about? Was this resolved?

If i remember correctly, in the chapter after they defeated yawm and went back to Mt Verner, it was said that they already had scouts looking around the base and was speaking on behalf of the guild for the other towns to join them. If until now there are still a lot around that did not join the guild, why would they join now with Daniel's invitation? Also Althea said that there are town battles happening around them so there are probably grudges present among different towns. Wouldn't it make the overall environment of the guild hostile of they just suddenly band together in guild base?

pukeofhurl

I like the perspective... but he couldve used event horizon on thise eldritch at the bottom as he flew past litterally just melt them away with no effort and then extend his hand to them... instead of seeing their plight flying by when he couldve solved it temporarily with no effort

Kemizle

I meant the comment above mine, about humans making an informal guild to clear dungeons

Monsoon117

This is awesome to hear. It was difficult to do, but if you guys are enjoying it, then it was worth the investment.

Monsoon117

Don't even worry man. I know how brutal financial duress can be. It's why like, 97% of my content is free. I'm not here to make money. I just want enough to support myself and share my passion. I hope you'll keep reading long into the future, and thank you so much for all the support up to now. It was more than enough.

Monsoon117

What do you mean? Daniel's reaction? If so, then to me, that's actually fine. Daniel's not that human anymore, and he's viewing from the outside in. It's actually one of the motives of this entire arc - Daniel dealing with his loss of humanity and the impacts that has on his thoughts and morality.

God speed you magnificent bastard. You can always wait for the Royalraod to catch up.

Zachary Smith

I loved the perspective of what life outside of the guild is like!

Jonathan Walker

I'll miss this book, I don't have a job so I can't pay for next months subscription, I'll miss your book. Goodbye.

I also like the base building and governing part. Praying to Schema and Old Ones for more of those.

Idan tal

With all the monsters around being nomadic without a proper defense line sounds like a fast way to die, unless they have some fast transportation

Kemizle

I don’t see that as a human reaction to real life

Bobby B.

Ya know, I had thought that Post Apocalyptic Nomadic Warrior tribes would be more common, or at least present, maybe a small(informal?) Guild built around clearing dungeons of a kind of adventurer's guild,

I'm a bit of a sucker for the whole base building and government aspect. I know it can be super dry for most people though. I love the idea od his guild starting A new government with them at the center as though they are the Federal Government and the other Settlements will be the states. Also gives plenty of opportunity for intercommunity drama. Not that we need more of that I suppose with all the spacey and fantasy societies going around. (:

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Hana Buechel

Ty for chapter! The world building was a nice change of pace and expanded what I assumed happened in earths aftermath. I’m looking forward to how you have Daniel delve in the home front as well as other worlds.

Tyicius

This is what I needed tonight. Took my mind off the paper I'm writing. Also the phrase "wasn't an unsubstantial sum" is a double negative, feels weird to read. Keep up the great work. You're the one of two novels I pay for and I have no regrets.

Monsoon117

Completely fine my man. Everyone reads for different reasons, whether they be the action, characters, worldbuilding, or in your case, the crafting. Those are perfectly reasonable, and I'm just happy you're enjoying the story, however you do enjoy it.

David Zimmerle

Really hoping he makes her a new gun or new armor like he did for Torix now that he has those crazy ass creation buffs and such. Gonna be honest his crafting is probably my favorite part of the story despite how little of it there is compared to everything else. Not to say I don't love everything else but i'm just a crafting junkie in stories like these. Edit: Happy Thanksgiving

Monsoon117

This chapter was interesting to write. There was quite a bit involved with it. The worldbuilding in particular was difficult. The reason for that was the sheer complexity of it. Changing the world as Schema has would result in dozens of cascading changes, socially, economically, in every way really. Quantifying that was very hard, and I decided to keep the first reveal relatively mild in order to give me time to think about it more. At the same time, I doubt I'll ever be able to think enough about it, so at some point, I just have to take that leap of faith. Either way, have a happy thanksgiving guys, and it's my families biggest holiday. It's also my favorite holiday in general, so I'm feeling good.


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