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260 A Bloody Compromise

🕑 Added 2020-03-10 01:39:06 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Oh yea, speaking of those golems from the last chapter, if they can absorb eldritch.. do they level up in some way through energy absorbed into their cyphers? Also, can any excess energy they absorb filter back to Daniel like those rings he gave to Hod and Althea? It wouldn't be much, but every little drop in the ocean counts for something..

M van Dongen

He kind of reminds me of the Iron Giant.....

Pretentious Slime

Recently, with the release of doom eternal being in a few days, I’ve gone back and played through doom 2016. I came to a conclusion just now after pulling up Patreon to read some more of your fiction. The New World is Metal as fuck. Like I get some awesome doom vibes in your descriptions of the Aldrich and the unadulterated destruction that occurs throughout.

Monsoon117

You mean the double commas? I'll just right them with compound sentences if that's the case. EDIT: I found what you meant. Yeah, it was redundant so I just copped the last part off. Pauldrons always rest on the shoulders.

Monsoon117

It's something that all creatives must deal with. The New World is like a baby to me. There comes a point where I've done all I can, so I must set it free. Otherwise, It will continue like some shambling, fetid corpse, making a mockery of itself.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the insight. It gives me an idea of what to do with the pacing going forward.

BrauBaer

Holy shit that last part really got me good. Goosebumps all over. Thanks for the chapter.

Aidan MacFetridge

Great chapter! The double resting is a little awkward to read in a sentence. Keep up the good work!

alexander julian

Prolly not coz there not threats to schema

James Danger Latham

Bruh, those last lines

Alex R

Can Daniel have kids still? Also do his golems give XP if others kill them?

Ray Burns

Very mixed feelings to hear you've mapped out the end of the series. On one hand it's like no! Keep going forever! But any work had a natural stopping point beyond which things just repeat or drag out so I'm also glad you have a goal to work towards. Any idea how much more of A New World we can expect?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Hana Buechel

I think u ment “Far”

Hana Buechel

Correction note:sending out “farm”smaller groups at a time

Hana Buechel

OMG that last sentence. Amazing chapter! The reluctance yet acceptance of his overwhelming might and role, Daniels thoughts just pulled at my heartstrings. TY for chapter.

Raiser

I want that Doom eternal soundtrack playing when I see Daniel rip & tear his enemies.

Sean Quinn

Also looking forward to your next works, if they are even half as popular as this one you will be set for quite a while.

Sean Quinn

Thanks for the new chapter and good job getting the rest of the story planned out while recovering from your illness. Very Daniel-esque work ethic. #Thumbsupforajobwelldone

Zachary Smith

Awesome man! I love this story so much.

Demonuss

Great chapter, I love how the last couple of chapters we've gotten to see how all this has affected Daniel on a mental level and how he copes with he coming chaos. The fact he shoulders all of this and he's only 20-21 is a feat in of itself.

Gabriel

Thanks for the chapter. Good luck to you and good luck to Althea and Daniel. I hope their relationship stays strong and healthy! It's one of the relationships I actually like in fiction.

Faruel

great chapter and welcome back

Lockwood

Just realised that Daniel is like 20ish years old at this point. That's crazy! Most of the people he's surrounded by are literally ancient and are either of a similar power level or crazy afraid...idk where I was going with this but damn. Daniel is the bestest lol

Thanks for the chapter. It seems like we've been getting a lack of meaningful character interaction. Which makes sense from a military perspective. These guys are in the middle of a campaign where every second is spent preparing for the next attack executing the next attack and recovering. But it's been a while since Daniel, Althea, Kessiah, Torix & our good friend Hod just sat down and had some nice interaction. In a completely different direction, I love it when we see the way "Normal" people react to Unbelievably overpowered MC's. That was half the fun of Overlord for example. Seeing "Normal" people react to Daniel from a Pov or something could be cool. Just my 2 cents. Still loving the story (:

Alex R

Good chapter. I enjoyed it.

Conor McGroarty

Glad you’re feeling better and thanks for chapter (now take the monthly protection money 😉). Guess it is the season for sickness 😷

Omega

Thanks

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. While I'm making this comment, I'd like to address my absence. I ended up getting very sick during February for about 2 weeks. During that time, I hit a sort of wall while writing. About a week about, I got a hit of inspiration during a brainstorming session. I now have the rest of the New World mapped out in a good bit of detail. This means I can focus on executing on my ideas rather than attempting to come up with the rest of the story as I write. I also know what I want to write next. It's interesting. I never considered writing something after The New World. I knew I would, but the prospect seemed daunting. As the New World's planning came to a close, a new idea awakened, and so the cycle of writing continued. Anyways, I'm really sorry for the delay. I know how painful a wait for a series can be. That being said, I want you all to know I appreciate your patience. You guys are the best supporters I could ask for. No, better than I could ask for. Staying with me through the ups and downs means the world to me. I'm hoping I will be able to repay each of you in kind with what I have planned. Either way, let me know if you found anything off guys.

Lockwood

Yay :D


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