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262 The Last Days

🕑 Added 2020-04-12 01:47:24 +0000 UTC

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Basically the spell Conjure Food but some people need a few extra steps to get to eating.

This one was nice and long. Good work man

Good chapter.

František Novák

That is not level showing up, that is charisma getting fed more than ever. Probably some new title messing with effectivity of the stat, and lack of behaviour selfcontrol from Daniel will brew new trouble.

Sanguine_Rayzel

Correct me if I'm wrong (and I may be) but wouldn't the method to fix the recruitment problem be to spilt the combat wing of the guild into the Legion Proper, the high level and highly motivated professional and vetted core of the Fighters and the Auxiliary, newer fresher aspirants under the commend of Older/ injured members of Legion Proper. The Auxiliary could act as scouts skirmishers and infiltrators (as their lower levels may arise less suspicion) and once they have been trained up to snuff and proven their loyalty they be inducted into Legion Proper?

Royce Gunter

I can't wait to see how he will craft the government for earth / his burgeoning empire. How will he balance the dichotomy of his wants for equal rights and a democratic sort of system when everyone will know that in essence it's a dictatorship.

Monsoon117

Thank you Kellen. I hope you're doing well too.

Wrath

Great chapter! I love it! This story is great and getting better all the time! I hope you are doing good and amazing well during these times.

Sean Ulrich

Heh heh heh... magic tofu...

Zachary Smith

All good man.

Monsoon117

thanks.

Monsoon117

I kind of don't understand your sentiment. Would you mind rephrasing it, and I'll answer as best I can.

BlackRazaras

Toric coughed into a hand, "Though my distance abilities are low." -> Torix

Dominic French

I can't wait to see how Earth has changed. It's kinda ironic really he started on Earth and saved it but we got to see a whole other planet and it's political system before we saw Earth's. Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Man, giving up coffee? It gives me shivers just thinking about it. Thanks.

Monsoon117

They've never been a romantic item or anything, though there's some tension there. It's nothing crazy, however, and they both have different priorities.

Monsoon117

I was feeling the same. I really want to move onto the more galactic and descriptive elements. A few comments mentioned strange dates compared to the actual timeline of the story, so I attempted creating a sense time passing as well. Hopefully it was interesting.

Monsoon117

It would require a rock of unbelievable size, about 300 miles across for a planet the size of earth.

Monsoon117

Man I messed that second sentence up lol. Sometimes editing can actually mess pieces of the writing up more.

Thanks for the new chapter! Really looking forward to how the golem training will continue 😀

Logan garland

So glad to finally be done with geiss. It was getting kind of monotonous.

Yatatata

How about creating a giant golem side of amountain and use rune for energy core?

s476

Thanks for the chapter! Also couldn't he ruin a planet the same way he does with cities? Summon a rock large enough, set it on course towards a planet and let gravity do the work

Hana Buechel

Magic tofu LoL, I died of laughter! Great chapter! I enjoyed how you worded Daniels monotonous slaughter, it weighed more heavily how you described it like an easy and everyday thing, killing millions. It’s a disconnect like how one can’t really fathom the horror of millions of dead on paper while in reality it is a thing of nightmares. Beautifully done! Can’t wait for more though I always will XD

Idan tal

just continue to write this great story and all is good, thanks for the chapter :)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Demonuss

Thanks for the chapter! Don't worry about the pledge thing the quality and span of your story is more than worth it. I do look forward to the golems becoming some immortal rip and tear Eldritch killing machines, or possibly becoming something akin to the Warforged would be pretty cool.

NightShade

Hey man, just wanted to let you know that I personally don’t feel you were taking advantage. My own pledge is about the cost of a decent coffee, so if drinking one less coffee a month means that I can support a writer who may have monetary issues, especially during these times, then I might just give up on coffee altogether. In all seriousness though, do take care and don’t beat yourself up about it too much.

Conor McGroarty

Thanks for chapter and stay safe. Honestly think that the Adairs are planning on “processing” the leviathans too (assuming they haven’t already) since they are setting shop on Giess. Even if they are aquatic, they are still useful all things considered. Hope MCs new legendary skill includes primordial mana since that is a mythical level skill and thus can fit in. Would be cool if MC gets a “final” mana type from his Sovereign skill combining all mana. Also a bit adorable about flying lizard Chrona complaining about magic animal tofu. Final thing: I’ve always thought that there could be some sexual tension between Krog and Chrona and so I ask are they a thing or will they be a thing? It could just be me misinterpreting it as they are old war buddies and close friends (close enough to confide grief and have happy back and forth). Don’t need to force romance where it isn’t there but I am curious about their love life if any even if a sentence or two one day (I remember Chrona’s family being mentioned after her first match with MC I believe but that could be anything from parents, cousins, siblings or even kids).

Kevin Ramos

It feels like it was just yesterday he was destroying his fists fighting bears. Now look at him. Sniff~ They grow up so fast.

alexander julian

Just do what you do best my man. Good to see everything moving

Our lil Daniel all grown up and breaking the Geneva convention. (:

take all the time you need. your work is one of the best i know its always a joy to read. so no need to rush haste makes waste just do your thing and it will turn out fine i think

Omega

At least it was a decent length to come back to. Spera held his own in that regard, however, so we pushed forward and hard. (Spear) It wasn't anything too grueling, but I gave attacked them from certain mental angles (wot?)

Monsoon117

You all amaze me with how kind are. Thank you. I really mean that.

Jason Smith

We're all just taking it as it comes man. Stay healthy and manage the stress. Be safe.

Monsoon117

And stay safe and sane out there guys. These are wild times.

Monsoon117

Guys, there's so much to adress, but I'll try to put it here. For starters, it's been an unacceptably long time since my last post. In normal circumstances, I would've paused pledges as I have done before. I neglected to consider just how high my tax payments would be this year. Not going into details, but it was much more than last year. I should've planned for it, and I have planned for it going forward. For now, all I can do is try and make it up to you guys. I'm sorry. I never wanted to take advantage of you all, and it feels as though I have. Apologizing and beating myself over the head for crumbling under stress and pressure does no one any good, however. It just wastes time and effort. The best apology I can do is get back to doing what I love most - writing.


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