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🕑 Added 2020-04-18 03:18:27 +0000 UTC

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František Novák

This is a big guess, but if I am right, it means you make long term plots too obvious. Florence felt blocked by Obolis in his growth, so he allied with the rebels and blighted. What could be considered an incompetence in governance is his evil plot - to not be deprived of his position, but also build up resistance forces against the empire under his command. He knows that dipping into dimensional cipher is the only way to progress in personal power, and he supposedly has access to empire´s treasury. Learning that would however remove him from Schema´s system, so he needs to ally with someone like Blighted, to survive the removal from system. Before that however, he will cause a downfall of empire, creating his own faction on it´s ashes and gaining the extra levels as sovereign. He wishes to accomplish this with future neutrality pact with blighted, and once he is enhanced enough throug the system, he plans to learn cipher and join blighted faction (which has it´s own cipher experts/users, as was proved by the crazy abbandoned facility leader). He can´t make any direct move against Harbinger´s Legion, that would result in immediate kicking from the system, but the opportunity to grab knowledge from yet another skilled cipher practitioner before leaving the system is priceles, which is why he is so giddy. Well my point is, that only an idiot would let his motivation slip like that during introduction. He may be power hungry psychopath, but as an idiot he would never reach his current position.

Seems interesting though I would really love a calmer arc where he would gradually develop his lands, cities and technologies back on Earth. It's great that he's a one man army but until now his faction was pretty useless imo. So having them grow a bit so they can serve would be great alongside a bit of kingdom building.

Conor McGroarty

Florence, or more specifically a brother, was mentioned during one of the Emperor’s chats (believe it was the one that ended with an Albony contacting the Emperor and Helios saying the Hybrids came) with Helios. Something along the lines of “your brother is on his world tending to another rebellion” and Helios knew and didn’t want to cut him slack as usual for anyone including himself. Or perhaps his father was mentioned in that conversation too who was also dealing with rebellion (never mind that was probably when he was moping after considering Lehesion his first real failure and wanted to call his dad who was busy quelling a rebellion and Helios musing “of course he is, he is too lenient” and then deciding to call Caprika). There are also those two twin brothers of Caprika who gave that octopus 🐙 mobile home for her trip (was when MC found first espen corpse and fought first skyburner). Point is Florence was mentioned even if it wasn’t by name.

alexander julian

You hadn't previously mentioned Florence no and the wording made it seem like you had which was a bit jarring. As far as introductions go it was great tho

alexander julian

Yes try to steal the girl of one of the most powerful fighters in the galaxy

alexander julian

Torix uses charisma as a secondary ability. He's an intelligence specialist. This is there first proper diplomat which is big coz previously they were just getting by on respect

Zachary Smith

I thought he’d make a move on Althea and Daniel would have to put him in his place, maybe later down the line....? As always thank you for this awesome story. Just think man when you finish it you can publish and it’ll be so popular and so many ppl will love it!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter

Hana Buechel

Ty for chapter! Liking the new character, Helios’s brother.

Conor McGroarty

As the booty warrior once said: “booty is more important than food, booty is more important than water.” The Harbinger is about to get some more too. In other news, let’s hope Florence didn’t have a hobby of letting rebellions happy to ease the boredom (though if the motive is easing boredom he should be safe as the Schism is quite exciting). Not thinking he is a traitor but he may be a loose cannon in a bad way (maybe I’m just being doubtful of people with great charisma and act like it as Yawm, Thisbey and Kiki were bad guys and Obolis is a beast; Torix specializes in charisma too but is like a grumpy teacher or family member to those close to him). On another note, Torix should have an easier time coordinating the Legion expansion plan of Earth with that Obelisk. The quicker Earth stabilizes and is under the Legion the better. Though MC needs to be prepared to defend Earth from the Adair’s when the secret is out (maybe MC could learn portal stuff? Well he has a lot of things to learn and that should be lower priority considering he has associate who can do it masterfully). Finally, the glassing of Giess is going to be a turning point one way or another and I predict it will be MCs latest rematch with Lehesion. Who knows, when the glassing likely fails, perhaps Elderfire can still be used as a beachhead to harass the rebel forces setting up shop on Giess..

Monsoon117

I had to read this like three times before I saw the mistake. Even when pointed out, it was still getting me.

Monsoon117

It did not. I forgot to change it. Thank you for letting me know.

Chapter 258: "Ambient Mana 3.567 Trillion" Chapter 263: "Ambient Mana 3.136 Trillion" It went down?

Lockwood

"Let me give it to you so you may be on our way." ---> "Let me give it to you so you may be on your way." When Helios gives torix the obelisk. Nice chap!

Monsoon117

Definitely a mistake. It's rocks at cities, and thanks for the help.

Omega

Nice chap, is this a mistake: I raised my palms, "I threw rocks and cities. It wasn't exactly complicated." At cities or and cities?

Lockwood

Thank ya for the pleasant surprise good sir. *tips hat*

Monsoon117

If I can get better, I might add those to the patreon posts if I get confident enough in my illustrations.

Monsoon117

A meaty chapter with a lot going on. Let me know if I messed up any names, and I can't remember if I already named Helios's brother earlier. Either way, let me know if that's a continuity error or if I messed something else up further down the line. I also started drawing again recently. I'm rather stunned by my progress, and I'm better than I imagined I'd be. Of course my work is far from quality, but for a starting point, it's not bad.

Zachary Smith

Thanks for more reading material good sir!

Zachary Smith

Nice!


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