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265 The Next Step

🕑 Added 2020-05-10 14:35:19 +0000 UTC

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Rande Knight

To avoid a mass uprising? Give them hope. Give people food, wine and wealth today and they'll soon take it for granted. But stuff _tomorrow_, people will work themselves to death for that.

Monsoon117

He has several presence oriented skills. They allow him to establish himself even when standing beside giants, often times overwhelming even figures like Obolis or Lehesion in some instances, though Daniel doesn't use it often. He's left the more specific aspects of leading to Torix, and they make a pretty solid dynamic duo.

Monsoon117

I'll make sure to note an update this next chapter. I was thinking his next skill would involve the golems and how he's making them.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

William

wasn't he working on his last legendary skill tho, what is up with that?

Hana Buechel

Ty for chapter!! Hope u do a POV on the reaction people have to Daniels golems. Seems fun! Can’t wait for more but u know I always will!!

The 49th Khan

Kinda thought he already had one. But it has been a while between updates and he has a lot of skills.

Conor McGroarty

Rise of Eden already does that with the general aura thing that can effect emotions. In any case, I imagine this is what some guild members would discuss at this speech: Guild A “sure is great the legion commander won’t ask us to do anything he can’t.” Guild B “Can’t the commander eat eldritch, hybrids and body slam cities into oblivion?” Guild A “... shit.” I know it wouldn’t be like that but it is funny to imagine them being nervous by “I wouldn’t ask of you what I can’t do”

Kemizle

It would be cool if Daniel works in some sort of leadership skill into his sovereign skill

Sebas Tian

Thanks for the chapter! And I have a feeling that Amara will become quite annoyed when she figures out the smooth talker xD.

Jonathan

I hadn't really noticed the time issues. Doesn't mean they are not there. I just might not have been paying close enough attention. ;P

Idan tal

Thanks for the chapter 🤩

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. This was a pretty smooth chapter to write, and I made sure to edit it to smooth out some of the dialogue. That doesn't mean it's perfect, however. Also, someone mentioned last chapter that the time scales were off. I'm wondering what a more believable time scale would be for general character ages? I intended for Helios and Florence to be relatively young in system terms, and Obolis is very old by comparison. They are a side branch of the family, though a successful one. Maybe clarifying that would help with the time issues.

Lockwood

Thanks for the chapter! :D


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