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268 Unexpected Help

🕑 Added 2020-05-25 13:04:41 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

Well to let you know how it worked out this is really cool to see minor characters being more than shocked and impressed. Like I said before people are feeling a lot more real and them having there own feelings and emotions make it easier to connect more to the world as a reader. Seeing Diesel return is awesome. It was awesome to see his more normal famaliar relationship with Daniel and to hear about what he'd been doing in the mean time. It'd be great to see how he and other characters who know him more personally but are still drastically below his level interact with him (ie pre schema people) it'd be interesting to see him them as either students of him or antagonists born out of jealousy and resentment. Looking forward to seeing more!

Monsoon117

How so? It's 2500 words not including the segment at the beginning from the previous chapter. That's around 9 pages in a book, and I edited the ending section to make it have some finality. I don't mean to be defensive or anything, I just want to know why it seems incomplete so I don't make the same mistake in the future.

Hana Buechel

Lol, fun chapter especially the part where u enlightened us on Daniels shit golem making skills; Or comparatively to Diesel. It’s nice cause it's fun to see how people around him think Daniel will do everything to a godly LV but in actuality besides his survivability and power he’s a pretty impressive but regular dude. Daniel also knows that, and it’s endearing how he is cool asking for advice and help rather than be some solitary do it all yourself hero/antihero trope. Ty for chapter!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

s476

Thanks for the chapter! Do not know id it is a phrase but : busy you is = busy you are?

drag0nreb0rn

You can tell that you split this up. Does not feel like a chapter.

alexander julian

Pretty sure lehesion is immortal. Mc could get s

Conor McGroarty

Wonder if Daniel will get some skills from Diesel about blueprinting and some other engineering stuff? MC really is starved for time considering the Sovereign skill is floating over his head all the time and this rebellion (though rebellion is also good for skill grinding combat skills). It would be cool if he had the time to get primordial mana as that seems like he can do some fun things with. Can’t really keep your ace out of the fight for three days though. In any case, things are going to come to a head in a matter of hours when the glassing happens and this rebellion is going to ramp up into stage 2 once they show they don’t need to fear glassing (what also sucks is Schema shouldn’t have a plan assuming it fails and will have to spend time doing so while there Adair’s already have a plan). Of course MC and Obolis will probably throw down with Lehesion and MC just gets stronger every time they have a rematch. Wonder how close they will be? At least MC can’t win without a sovereign skill but he may be able to not lose if he is able to hold the line indefinitely (this last battle will probably take the rest of the mana from Giess which could be a blessing considering it’s just prolonging the torment and they can start planning how to fix it from zero as I doubt it will be destroyed unless MC does it himself). Wonder if MC would get a tree called planet cracker or something.

Monsoon117

He's smart in some ways, but he still lacks in others.

Monsoon117

I choose to fail in spectacular fashion...But for real, fixed and thanks.

Azuolas Korsakas

Seems fun

Connor Alexander

Loving the new storyline it's been cool seeing outside the bubble Daniel's been kinda stuck in and getting to see how earth and other higher levels in society function. Thanks, and thanks for pointing out Daniel is still a good bit of a blockhead

Omega

especially considering their you're first ones." Thats the wrong they're, and amazingly, also the wrong your

Lockwood

Thanks for the chap!

Blake Richardson

Great as always

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Ah yeah, let me know if you liked the chapter as well or if you found any errors in it, as always.

Monsoon117

Hey guys. I've been writing over the course of this week, and I ended up with a 14,000 word chapter. That's a bit too long, even if I'm trying to make longer chapters. I'll be splitting it up into 3-4 chapters over the next few days while writing further on. I don't want to edit them all at once because editing is by far the most soul crushing part of writing, at least for me. Therefore, I'll be partitioning it out over a few days. That means you guys have a lot to look forward to, however.


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