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269 Anticipating an Evening

🕑 Added 2020-05-27 13:12:28 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

He definitely won't.

Zachary Smith

Hell yea brother I love this story

Kemizle

When Daniel makes her that gravity enchantment I hope he doesn’t use his skin for it

Joshua Little

Next project, spaceship/station golem. Thanks for the chapter.

Hana Buechel

Torix is the best XD Ty for chapter

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Azuolas Korsakas

Amazing. Cant wait to see it go wrong

alexander julian

There's still some degree of equal exchange. Those are powerful artificacts and crazy amounts of energy. Daniel just happens to be really good at that stuff. Plus she was just trying to see how far she could push it as it was

James Danger Latham

"Thanks for the bode of confidence" to "Thanks for the vote of confidence" Beginning of Daniels section. Great chapter, can't wit for the next

The 49th Khan

In space.

Ferco

I really like the long chapters, I get a more... "rounded" feeling from them, like... they have the right amount of length for what you wanted to say.

Conor McGroarty

MC has a suit, now all he needs to to flex hard when it’s time to rumble and have this music playing in the background as the suit tears/explodes off: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XUhVCoTsBaM Also willy should be wily though the image of Torix conjuring floating dildos is amusing (the willy mage). Also, poor Ophelia doesn’t realize that she should have asked for more considering who she is asking and how much time it will take

s476

I quite liekd this chapter, but i think i will love the next one. I love daniel meeting new people. Thanks!

Laevus Deus

Ditch the coma after"far " and just end the sentence.

Lockwood

"They settled onto three of my worlds thoroughly so far, Belgara, the most infested of them." This didn't sound...right? I may have just been reading it wrong.

Monsoon117

The new routine is working well, and I feel like I've gotten my life in order. The goal now it to lock it in so that I can continue in a sustainable, healthy manner going forward. That's the dream.

Lockwood

Thx for the chap Monsoon. You're on a roll with these chapters!

Monsoon117

Before I usually focused entirely on clarity and grammatical adjustments for my editing. I've added a content edit with those focuses as well. This means I draft out a series of tweaks or changes I'd like to add to a chapter to enrich it. I also consider cutting out certain sections if they aren't up to snuff. This results in a much more active and involved editing process overall. Let me know if it's working out.

Monsoon117

This might be the largest chapter I've ever released. It's definitely in the top three. Let me know if you've enjoyed it and the content within it. I should be able to post another chapter tomorrow, but no promises there. I've still got 5,000 words to edit before posting it, so that's quite the commitment. That being said, it's not been so bad editing as of late. It might be because I've adjusted a few parameters of my editing. I'll explain that in a comment below for those interested.


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