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278 Grasping the Ethereal

🕑 Added 2020-09-04 17:51:54 +0000 UTC

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Calleman20

Awesome that your back, I missed the break, becouse I was saving chapters to binge later. Hope your doing better and your taking care of yourself, becouse that really important, so yeah have a nice day a bye.

Memoulisous 23

Awesome chapter I’m happy I pledged to your patreon again I was really missing this story anyway keep up the good work and can’t wait for more:).

Monsoon117

This is a huge compliment. Thank you.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter.

EvilGodAsura

Thanks for the chapter!

Wrath

Thank you for another great chapter I really like the progress in the flow of the story and can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Good to see you back. I know I can take months or years between writing sessions myself.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Code Reed

It is pretty good I must admit. Only one of two stories I support on patreon. My favorite aspect of this entire story is how the characters use there brains to think things through to logical conclusions 'before' doing them. It may sound obvious but I've got something like 800 books and you may be surprised how often the story is driven by dumb, poorly thought out decisions that only turn out ok due to 'luck' or 'fate'. Honestly, following and supporting a story featuring 'PEOPLE' and not cardboard cut-outs of individual traits propped up into character is and absolute Joy!

Hana Buechel

Thank you for the chapter. I do like the edit where Adair doesn’t know Daniel and his guild come from earth. I’d assume Adair would never believe Daniel comes from a newly integrated world and like how other aliens are surprised to find out Daniel is a human (regular humans and him look different and have vastly different LV of strength) I’d think Adair would never think the weak humanity she Is trying to recruit would be Daniels home species. A case of what your looking for is right under your nose yet you can’t find it. Anyway, glad your writing again and you should have confidence in your ideas and logic. This is one of the best writen stories I’ve had the pleasure of reading. Basic plot makes sense and stays true to itself, characters grow in believable manner, and you don’t break the rules of the world you’ve created. TY TY TY!!!

Kemizle

Great chapter

Oliverthms

Thanks :)

Erich Hansson

Like lockwood said its good to have you back 👍

Lockwood

Good to have ya back m8

Monsoon117

In other words, I'm hitting my stride once more. It feels good to be back.

Monsoon117

So I've been writing one session a day until I could manage continuous, focused effort on my writing for an hour at a time. At the same time, I got my sleeping schedule and caffiene intake in order so that I was at my full ability. I've also re-added my stretching routine and daily 1 mile walk for health and happiness. I'll be adding 5 more minutes of effort a day so that I can get back up to two sessions of intense, focused work daily. At that point, I'll be back up to my previous output.

Jack Danel

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