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281 The Wielders of Monsters

🕑 Added 2020-09-23 20:14:12 +0000 UTC

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Corwin Amber

It's fine. Happy to help. I'm several behind the main chapter anyway. I like to binge several at a time each time :)

Monsoon117

Late to the party here, but thanks for the help either way.

Corwin Amber

'this quite a useful' -> 'this is quite a useful' 'A more spikes later' <- no number given for how many (or sentence just needs to be fixed)

Monsoon117

You were right and fixed.

Monsoon117

Obolis will aim to get benefits from the situation. That's his biggest strength - he can turn a situation around by seeing all the variables clearly. That ability to percieve everything and not get boxed in, it lets him make bad situations into good ones. That's what I'm aiming to showcase at least.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Grog_Guy

Thanks for the chap!

Bobby B.

YES!! I was sooo hoping for something like this!!

Hana Buechel

I feel like Obolis will regret giving Daniel that planet after/if he learns about the resource and rift Daniel discovered on it. At the same time though, it was probably a good decision on Oboliss’ part in giving it to Daniel as if the only way to win the planet is to have it worship Daniel...means it;s basically already Daniels. Ty for chapter!!!

Lockwood

Man, I know I saw a typo where "a and" was used instead of what I think should be an "an". I'm having trouble finding it now. Anyone else notice it or am I crazy?

Code Reed

Ha! About half way through the conversation I guessed he'd be getting that planet. In retrospect it's not surprising given the nature of the plan to conquer it. Besides, it's better to fight the war on another planet rather than his own. I think that's in The Art Of War somewhere.

Monsoon117

No problem. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it.

Monsoon117

Of course. Word choice is always difficult, and I aim to have a wide variety of words used that are coherent and interesting. Thanks for mentioning it.

Detrox

Great chapter. Tho I found the double use of here and there in two sentences kind of bad. Surely it was just an oversight right?

Lockwood

Man Obolis has Daniel on the hook again. Can't wait to see where this goes. Thx for the chap Monsoon!

Alex R

Was expecting that ending when Obolis was talking about retreating.

David Urvig

Yay! First one!


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