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284 Amassing Many

🕑 Added 2020-10-08 19:57:38 +0000 UTC

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Joey McGowan

When I have a stockpile of chapters to read though, I enjoy the other characters POV. Just so hard to save a stockpile of chappies.

Joey McGowan

I enjoy the lifestyle chapters with Daniel. I'm iffy on the other pov's however, when I'm caught up with the story and read chapter to chapter as its released.

Joshua Little

What can I say, I like reading good stories.

Lockwood

Yup np

EvilGodAsura

Your amazing 👏

Monsoon117

I'll mention it then, and there'll be an explanation from Torix and Helios as to why warping is difficult. Daniel would be pretty good at it though once he got a handle on the skill. I'll also be mentioning th learning of more skills as mentioned above. I can forget to add those portions when trying to balance other elements of the story, so reminders to add such and such thing are very helpful.

EvilGodAsura

Your really setting up warping to be special then. Spatial magic should be exactly the kind of thing Daniel is made to learn. Just that he has made no mention of even trying to learn it yet is already super weird considering his whole dimensional talent. After all you know Daniel's future struggles but we and Daniel should not know the difficulty until you actually have him address it.

Monsoon117

And thank you for being such a consistent reader over the years.

Monsoon117

Someone asked in the discord, but I actually don't live in Canada. It's a cool place from what I've heard, both metaphorically and literally.

Monsoon117

It would be, though the golem's wouldn't be able to create golems of anywhere near their own quality.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help.

Monsoon117

It's definitely on his to-do list, however.

Monsoon117

On a personal basis, I agree with you. Warping would make Daniel's skillset much more well rounded, and it would prevent him from being vulnerable in certain scenarios. That being said, Daniel has a very real and palpable goal right now. While warping would help, it would take up a tremendous investment in time and effort. Warping isn't easy, and there's warping specialists for that reason. By the time Daniel learns that skill, the Adair's might well have colonized earth and taken over Blegara completely. It wouldn't help with his Soveriegn skill much either, at least most likely.

Sam4005

Yeah as canadian go save canada. We have moose and maple syrup (the best). Ty for chapy and like others said, i would like to see daniel fight and gain power

Regnal

Yes! I've said it many times before that he should learn how to warp. That is the one thing he is missing and needs to learn so he isn't always depending on Helios. Also that multiple minds skill allowing for multitasking should be a huge help for golem crafting and should be practiced constantly.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

zalex

A thought, isn't it possible for his SG to self reproduce???

David

Same here. I'd like to see Daniel working on developing a gateway skill (seems like an obvious thing for a living Dimension), and working on developing his telepathy further.

Pretentious Slime

Loved it

EvilGodAsura

Daniel gaining skills and fighting are the most enjoyable part for me. Just a little of that sprinkled through would help keep what gave the story its hook alive to introduce more character and world building.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

MrSmile

This chapter was great. I enjoy seeing characters go through their day-to-day and seeing in real time the changes they went through has on them (and their surroundings). Also gives some breathing room and contrast to the battles against the Aldair. Although maybe I could be bias because of Daniel diving into golem production. I love seeing Daniel powering up and "training sequences" in general.

Lockwood

With that in mink, I ran a few tests on my skin. --> With that in mind, I ran a few tests on my skin. Beginning of the 4th paragraph of Daniel's part. Nice chappy m8.

Monsoon117

Hey guys. This chapter was designed to showcase character development and to showcase the passage of time. The next chapter or two will likely be the venture out into Elysium. I intend on doing this once to showcase their different styles of life, along with what can go wrong in a mission like this. Let me know if you enjoyed this kind of thing, and I'll keep your thoughts in mind going forward.


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