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287 Galactic Anarchy

🕑 Added 2020-11-03 22:44:48 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

It's because I didn't unlock it. Thank you for letting me know, and fixed.

Sodiumfreesalt

Kingtie

Nice chapter, Athena had some great moments, I loved the escalation

Monsoon117

They both have blood magic. It's innate in Althea's native species. Daniel unlocked the ability early on while fighting Baldag-Ruhl.

Monsoon117

The level cap increase came after completing the mission. That's the real reward. Getting the level increases would be relatively simple. As for her constitution, it is only 2,890, and that's including her follower bonus. She a lithe, agile fighter. Being super heavy and dense doesn't help her battle.

Is Althea's mana combined with her health, like Daniel? What causes that? I think Torix has separate mana, right?

Is Althea's Constitution really only 2890, or is that a mistake? Does that include the +2500 Follower bonus? Also, it would be good to include the level cap in the stats display. I have enough trouble remembering what it is for Daniel, let alone for other characters. Did Althea not gain any levels because the level award came before her level cap was raised?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Klukas

Loved the chapter, adds a layer of depth having different perspectives. Have to eat the veggies before you can enjoy the meat.

Sebastian Prue

I've enjoyed these changes in pov! I love seeing the world and characters you've crafted from other view points. I think you're making the right choice adding these in every so often

alexander julian

I think people just don't like moving away from Daniel to much probably because when we do see the other povs we've had so little time in them there stories aren't as built as his. That being said I absolutely loved this one. Best alternate pic yet from what I can remember. I've always wanted to understand Althea better. Interesting seeing her make choices around practicality her core values, her eldritch side and the shit she's dealing with as far as class progression. I think her body insecurities are character point that would be good to be resolved relatively soon given she's been dealing with them for so long now and with the scale of other issues they deal with. Like if in the next couple chapters they finally zeroed into it probably in response to this mission. Rather than it be this weird thing that Altheas dealing with but not progressing and apparently her boyfriend or other friends don't talk to her about. Might afford us a little more on there relationship. This mission being almost a near miss forcing them having a developmental moment make sense despite all the other stuff going on. Soz for the tangent haha. Also great to see relatively normal people's limitations so we can understand and compare them better. Stuff like mana exhaustion with Alexander and Hod is cool too see. Maybe some ethical considerations with the more eldritch team members cutting down the crowd when there were probably better solutions. Etc etc. Lot of stuff to chew on. I could do a whole analysis s but this is getting a biiiiiit long haha

Lockwood

Shit man. I really liked this chapter. From the crazy fight for survival to the sweet touch of the class upgrade. Keep up the great work man.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter!

Monsoon117

This is excellent to hear. I'm glad I was able to win you over, if only a little bit.

Monsoon117

Thank you. I wanted this chapter to shine, especially after recieving some criticism for the introduction of the segment. In the end, I'm proud of my work, and I've done what I set out to do - expand the world further.

Code Reed

I'll admit, overall the different point of view will probably benifit the reader moving forward. Can't say I was to invested, but there were certainly some interesting lore bits to chew on. I wonder if Daniel's words to. Le.. However you say that guys name, whatever, the giant dragon guy. I wonder if the fear of being consumed for eternity is wearing him down. I got the sence that he was quite desperate while fighting the fortress. I'm happy we're getting back to Daniel, but I can't say this section wasn't up to your usual standard.

Sam4005

Oh and we got a class upgrade, everybody love that, it was the cherry on the cake

Sam4005

Really loved this chapter. The quality is excellent and its show us so much thing. We can see the point of view of "normal" people, more insights and a deeper perspective of althea personality ( one of the best chapter for this), we can see how awesome daniel really is because he close to the lvl of cataclysmic entities that we see in this chapter. And its answer my question of why althea wasn't using arcane magic last chapter, she already has true damage. Anyway ty for chapy, it was really great and well written.

Idan tal

Thanks for the great chapter, really enjoyed the last two, and the improvements to their status is great as well. 🤩

Titaniumtac

Thx for your extra work, we sure appreciate the story and look forward to new releases

Alexis Avalos

Awesome chapter thanks man

Monsoon117

Man, talk about some productive last few days. I ironed out an adjustment to my editing process, and it saved me half a day of work. That's the only reason I got this chapter out, besides working a little extra at the end of the day. Either way, this is it for Althea's Pov, so let me know if you enjoyed it overall, especially after seeing it in its entirity.


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