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288 A Targeted Approach

🕑 Added 2020-11-12 00:29:26 +0000 UTC

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Alex R

I don't disagree with that, but by what we have been told so far she has not gotten the special dispensation to be allowed to be a Follower yet.

Code Reed

To be fair, Amara put her /It's life on the line to help Schema's side and is about to help Daniel pacify a world. Daniel should have a solid argument in his favor.

Monsoon117

This is why the portalists were able to warp 100's of times in a day. It works, sure, but it's not much faster than simply traversing super quickly. Most people experience mana depletion from casting over and over again as well. You also have to think what distance is within your comprehension. It's like trying to understand a million units of anything. Think a million people for instance. Can you really fully understand how large that is? Now scale that up, say 10 million, 100 million. The concepts are usable but not fully grounded in a visual comprehension, if that makes sense. That kind of comprehension is required for warping.

Monsoon117

I can take it out. I often times don't mention all the titles since it's a lot of typing, and I kind of like sprinkling them in here or there. There's little surprises that way.

What's with "The Formless Polymorph" title in Althea's message? That is not a title listed in her stat display last chapter.

That whole explanation for warping being difficult seems to gloss over the fact that as long as you do not travel too far in a single warp, it should be much easier. Maybe most people cannot handle that, but Daniel does not breathe, is immune to heat and cold and radiation. So he could travel a long distance by dividing it up into many shorter warps, since hanging out in interstellar space is no problem for him. But 'short' could still be a significant distance, like a light year, at least until he gets close to his destination and has to keep the warps shorter so he does not crash into the middle of a star or planet. By the end of the travel, he could just be going by line of sight. He should also be able to take Torix and golems with him, if necessary. Other people might be a problem, if they cannot handle the conditions in interstellar space. Although even then, I would guess they could build something halfway between a spacesuit and a tiny spaceship that would be enough to keep them safe.

alexander julian

Well i notice whenever you do some little acknowledgement of his his underlying feeling. And it really feels like a truer representation that sort of repression that can last years and years that you barely notice before something snaps. Given how much physical time has passed both for Daniel and us the development feels that inching level of someone who hasn't had time to think rather than the accelerated growth of character based stories or the mental impervious mess of action heroes and the like. Makes this feel more like a diary than a story which is something I find very unique and interesting that brings in my attachment so much with this story

Monsoon117

It just felt right to add, like not putting in that scene would be brushing obvious feelings under the rug, and I didn't want that.

David Urvig

Also might be that she can become a follower because she has hacked her way into Schema's system.

Titaniumtac

great job thx!

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

alexander julian

Can I just say that the acknowledgement from Daniel of his truly wild approach to dealing with his mental health and his situation is awesome to see. And some care given to his relationship specicially when they need it after a mission like that

alexander julian

I believe she was allowed in reluctantly so having the overseer come in with I know your helping us but don't get to big for your britches here would add some good (whatever the native to a different dimension equivalent to rasicim is) tension between schema and Daniel.

Alex R

I think it would be good for that clarification. Because if I remember correctly, the Overseer stated not to let Amara become one. That Daniel was toeing the line with her just being in the guild. It's been awhile since I've read it so I might be forgetting things.

Monsoon117

She's been allowed into the guild via the Overseer before I beleive. It's an understood exception between Schema and Daniel. I could make that more clear in a following chapter, like through a meeting between the Overseer and Daniel? That would be pretty solid post Blegara's siege.

Monsoon117

Oh boy, now that is one hell of an error.

Alex R

Amara isnt able to become a Follower though, Daniel will get his Guild Leader Rights stripped. She is an Eldritch, its against the rules.

Sam4005

Surfing her Obolis and relaxing on our bed, Althea peered up at me. Sound like cheating to me xD

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Last few chapters have been great.

Tyicius

Great chapter! Edits: I rand through several of the common patterns, -> I ran through

Knight Axel

Awesome! Can't wait man.

EvilGodAsura

Fire 🔥

Pls more

Monsoon117

This was a massive chapter, and it proved challenging to write. I wanted to address concerns over warping in a natural way, and I believe I did so. I also wanted to explain the aftermath and the character changes involved. The next chapter will be a skill oriented one with status updates and whatnot, so look forward to that guys.


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