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68 Tasting Deception

🕑 Added 2017-10-23 05:55:29 +0000 UTC

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Umut Numanoglu

Thanks for the chapter, I found a typo: their already zombies -> they're And the whole argument about nuclear war is BS. If humans weren't greedy they wouldn't make wars that much. I'm pretty sure there are some peaceful races out there. The second argument though couldn't be more true, you even didn't mentioned that every time knowlage is inherited some parts of it gets lost (bc people forget to mention it, it feels no longer relevant, pupils can't learn well enough, bad teaching style etc.)

Cole Mathews

"sounds like their already zombies", should be *they're.

Chrome

Sorry for my late edits, I've been busy. grabbed he plasma (grabbed the plasma) front of three lasers (of the three) You’re rate (should be your) while your here. (should be you're) a bought of joy (I'm not 100% sure but I think this should be bout because bought doesn't make sense there) sounds like their (should be they're) At the end there's multiple mentions of "wolfs" but the plural is wolves. Thanks for the chapter!

Monsoon117

He could rot the tree and then it collapses for sure.

Monsoon117

I mentioned that past level 100, the experience debuff is removed. This prevents higher level fighters from not clearing lower level dungeons. I will explain this in more detail in a later chapter, and I think it was mentioned somewhere in chapter 30-ish.

Monsoon117

It would ruin the surprise element the FearFighters had planned.

Naoggeddon

Why spend all the time slowly walking through the forest instead of just using oppression like a search light clearing swaths of the forest in front with his new improved control

Max Vidal

Thanks, I really like your work.

"They corned a ravenous monster." Should read "cornered" instead. Also, OH BOY Oh BOy oh boy!. Is this the time Daniel fights and kills something 500 levels higher than him and wins? Also.... umm, does the whole 20 level difference meaning no xp gained thing still apply? I don't recall that having been brought up again, though I'm slowly rereading everything and may have missed it.

Casey

Random thought could Daniel cut down a tree with a swipe of his aura now that he has more control

Zachary Smith

Oooooohhhhhhh shit! Didn't see coming! Fuck em up Daniel!

Monsoon117

I forgot to leave a little comment voicing my thoughts. I focused on worldbuilding in this chapter, so I hope you guys enjoy it.

Monsoon117

No problem man. Hope you enjoyed it.

Ty


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