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74 Corrupted Ruin

🕑 Added 2017-11-04 02:14:25 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Awesome!! Will this replace the runes on his body? :)

What is ti?

pane over ti. Along the lining of the walls, sharp crystals lined the walls. Althea kept clear o

I grit my teeth and clenched my teeth?

Stephen Emrick

Story is great. Grammar is good overall. Just letting you know you used ruins instead of runes at one point. Also the sentence that says whenever her hand slapped his back doesn't feel right.

MAJmuffin

thanks for the chapter mate

Zachary Smith

Lit asf in the sand worms stomach brah!

Monsoon117

There is, but Althea can't drink it safely. Daniel is immune to disease and whatnot, but she isn't. Even then though, the water could be dangerous for other reasons.

Naoggeddon

But there is water in the city...."Some of these beams met into other glass balls in rivers and waterfalls flowing inside the city. From those glass balls, colors shined blue. Lanterns of orange floated through the cavern’s stalactite ridden roof. Within them, gems hummed a quiet sound. Combine the gentle humming with the flow of water, and the city had a way of setting you to ease."

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

Judging by the following sentences it would be, "We don’t have any water, but at least we have food and shelter."

tethra

yea that confuses me as well since they talked about eating earlier and are surrounded by water but my best guess since althea said filter water it was suppose to be we don't have any water, but at least we have food and shelter.

Xwaderman

We don’t have any water, but at least we have water and shelter. We don’t have any food?


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