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78 Not as It Seems

🕑 Added 2017-11-09 21:24:16 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Awesome, great addition to their time there.. Na-na-naaaaa!!! (ominous) sounds like Schema is being a bad boy.. or maybe his minions are. I hope he gets some real training in that ancient language.

Stephen Emrick

I agree, it's a nice touch to any dungeon delver type story.

I like how you actually use stats in this story. In most story’s they really don’t do much.

Monsoon117

The runes for magic operate off of mana. The more mana, the more pronounced the effect. The 'eldritch' runes work by changing the space they influence. They alter the space into something else. If you wanted to create a room of lollipops and dandelions, you could with the eldritch runes.

Bob

Where does the energy come from for Runes or Eldritch Runes? Sometimes it reads like it's coming from the individual, sometimes it reads like it's pulling the energy from somewhere else. It would fit the character profile to attempt to fix the planet with self-powered eldritch rune O3/CO2/H2O atmospheric injector-concentrator. That... would look an evil black spiral cloud from mount doom. And would probably create a swamp.

Monsoon117

Man, I'm not gonna lie, I enjoy every single one of the lit comments you make. It's always refreshing just to see someone digging the story.

Monsoon117

Excellent ideas with the newtonian fluid and whatnot. Those kinds of skills will come with further evolutions of his armor and other stuff I can't spoil yet.

28th00

Urge to kill Schema: Rising. At least I assume so. Our Harbinger of Cataclysm seems to not take too kindly to them either. So how much more does he need for a 3rd Mythical skill? At least, I think he got his second... I need to find a skill list. Then he's gonna somehow magically merge them all into 1 Legendary one that grants a Class? This sounds... Incredibly difficult to do. Especially if you have to combine those leadership skills with the movement and combat ones...

Gabriel

Since Daniel seems to have total control of his armour as it is a part of him could he have the ability to change the basic structure of his armour ir slowly be able to do so? Such as turning the armour into something similar to a Non-Newtonian fluid so the more force the more resistance applied; giving him a skill that could reduce force of kinetic impacts? It could also allow him his armour to feel like more of an insane leather letting Althea to feel like she is actually touching a living being when in contact with him. Also could he change the structure of his armour to reduce friction to let him move more quickly above and under ground? That could work with his whole build and show fine control over his armour.

Zachary Smith

Lit love the mystery, diggin the story

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Chakfor

Very nice chapter! Thanks

Louisthau

Perfect, a quickie just before going to bed!

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy the chapter. Focusing on adding meaning to this segment, and setting up the framework for stuff later on.


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