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🕑 Added 2017-11-14 02:58:07 +0000 UTC

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SadGuy

If something else crawls out after he beats the snake, it'll be undeniable proof that this is the world of JRPG. Only in such nonsensical places would you find a Boss with a basic form, a final form and a Final-final form.

Scott Rutherford

Awesome, awesome.. I wonder how far that worm will go towards his armor evolution? I hope there are more worms he can kill and level from. :)

MAJmuffin

nice chapter man

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

You may want to just make a habit of doing a control+f for when/whenever and double check those. Its a bad habit for you.

Praise over, now typoish thread. "Beside us, waterfall churned the water into a pool of white water and bubbles." Should be "Beside us, a waterfall churned the water into a pool of white water and bubbles." "Whenever the worm’s wave shot through me, my bones and blood shook to their core." Should be "When the worm’s wave shot through me, my bones and blood shook to their core." "Again, the Drikah came up like cataclysm." should be "Again, the Drikah came up like a cataclysm." "As if fatigued, it turned from a devastating struggle into an eventual victory." Should be "As it fatigued, it turned from a devastating struggle into an eventual victory." "I soaked in the thick sanguine, pooling into the flesh of the worm as I carved through it." Should be something like "I soaked in the thick sanguine mess, pooling into the flesh of the worm as I carved through it." Get what you meant, but that's not actually what the word means. Its not ACTUALLY synonomous with blood.

Woo! New chapter, and awesome boss fight.

Chakfor

Well, that escalated quickly. I guess the Drikah wasn't it's final form?

Chakfor

Totally understandable. Thanks for the chapter, makes Monday a little better!

Monsoon117

Very fun chapter to write guys. Hope you enjoy. Also, I ended up taking a few days off to decompress. I'm in this for the long haul, so I have to maintain sustainable patterns for writing and all that.


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