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🕑 Added 2017-11-17 19:21:47 +0000 UTC

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Chawki89

JK of course but like many of the other readers, I enjoy Hod’s character and the flavor he adds to the story.

Chawki89

Your story was shit before Hod showed up. This is the only story I’ve ever read that took almost 80 chapters to introduce the main character!

Monsoon117

I can change the wording a bit there. It's not meant to be demeaning, but more like a bit of surprise for Daniel. He's used to people messing up around him. EDIT: I changed it so that Daniel blinked then said, "Wow, Briggs...Good Job."

Leonard Marchant

'I gave him a thumbs up, “Hell yeah Briggs. That’s what I’m talking about.”' is it just me or does it come across as kinda of condescending when Daniel says this? Paired with the thumbs up too, it just feels... demeaning? Maybe I'm being too sensitive.

MAJmuffin

LMAO, dry man. HAHAHA

Xwaderman

i love Hod, he spices up things.

Matthew Kidd

God I am so glad you introduced Hod as a character. He brings some much needed levity to Daniel's group. Maybe even enough to offset the Dry Man lol.

Monsoon117

Completely fine. Glad I could surprise you.

Josh Hamm

Ah didnt see 82 come up thanks for the double chapters

Josh Hamm

You posted chapter 83 when the last chapter was 81 was this your intention? Or a mis-label? I dont eant to read ahead if the wrong chapter was posted

Monsoon117

Another short-ish chapter around 2k words Hope the humor was good and kept the transition chapter entertaining. I enjoyed writing it at the very least. I may post another chapter today after this too.


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