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84 Finalizing Details

🕑 Added 2017-11-20 17:06:42 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Hmmm.. Torix has a lot of skills, right? Could he start merging some to create himself a lot of mythical skills and then a class?

Monsoon117

I'll give it a bit for visualization. The tree was about the size a normal man could put their arms around it, but just barely.

pukeofhurl

he was doing that when still pre level 100 with low class undead if i recall correctly and then stopped killing them and only training with them once they were higher quality so as not to reduce torix's power

Scott Rutherford

Side question.. can Daniel's Armor absorb the mass/energy from a defeated undead? Like those that Torix summons? I'm curious if Torix has enough stashed away to evolve Daniel's armor to the next level.

Scott Rutherford

I'd like a little more detail on the tree he obliterates at the end of this chapter.. how tall / wide is it? How much of the trunk is vaporized? What is the size of the tree that remains which he catches as it falls? We talking a tree about 6 inches in diameter or we talking redwood sized where several people could hold hands to encircle it?

Arthur

" what do with you." there should be a "to" as in "what to do with you."

Arthur

“I can spy on using my stealth form." there should be a "them" between "on using"

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

He needs a legendary skill first. After that, he'll get his class after a while later. I'm thinking within the next 20-30 chapters. Maybe around chapter 100 or so. Also, thanks for the donation man. It means a lot.

I was wondering when Daniel gets a proper class? And btw paid the first thingy for you now

Monsoon117

Thanks for mentioning this. I'll go back and check through those and give them a bit more depth. They were actually attempts at making the dialogue a bit more organic. Oh well. Not all changes are improvements after all.

I lately feel some naivety from dialogs like all these 'perfect plan, awesome work etc' and resolving any oral dispute in few sometime 'childish' phrases. They are just not very organic.

Monsoon117

That is true, punching is pretty much the only way to solve problems in the new world, but the telekinetic augments have been operating like this the whole time. They just haven't been described like this exactly yet. I think of them as bullet punches. It's like a logical loophole. Also, your comments are awesome.

28th00

Wait, did he just punch his own forcefield and make it a bullet? A new way to punch things that are too far to punch. Cause punching is how we deal with our problems in The New World.

Monsoon117

Ah yea, here's a link the the site, <a href="https://monsoon117.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://monsoon117.com</a> It still needs some work. Like, a ton of work. That's what I've been working on in my free time while I'm not writing.

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoyed the chapter. I've been having a ton of fun writing these lately. I started a website up as well on WordPress. I'm hoping to edit my story and post the chapters onto it as I write new chapters onto my patreon. With how many outages RRL's been having lately, it's got me a bit nervous too. I don't want all my work to siphon down the drain should their servers fail.


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