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86 The Final Piece

🕑 Added 2017-11-26 22:55:14 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

Thank you very, very much. This is an awesome compliment.

Hod is one of my favourite characters. Though he's the comic relief, he's still not a cardboard cutout, and although he talks funny and does stupid things, he's not stupid, and his last line takes the cake. Awesome. I don't know how you do this, but all your characters are as good, if not better, than what you'd see from a pro writer.

Scott Rutherford

Will he max out his crafting / runic abilities before he uses them on the armor? Or will he focus on getting another mythic before upgrading it?

Damika

This is exciting

Monsoon117

Of course. Daniel isn't going to save them before facing someone like Yawm.

Nanooki12

Is he going to use his points for his Paths before the final battle?

Monsoon117

The chapter title is referring to the last piece before they go out and try beating Yawm down, including his followers.

28th00

I thought the last piece was his final Mythical Skill for the Legendary Skill that equals a Class? If anything, I just want that to happen so I understand what the hell it is! Classes, and what a Legendary Skill can do besides being better than the limitless Mythical. Hod is a dork. A super dork. You gave him access to the internet, and he adapted to the Disco Age, this is gonna be a loooooong rift...

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

I'm thrilled about that. This is awesome to hear.

Monsoon117

I intend to. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

King Gonflick

Lovelove love it. Keep it coming

Two things. First I want to tell you I originally started reading your story a month or two ago on Royalroad. I found it an interesting concept but at the time I was also reading the Ghosthound. Im not a fan of reading two stories at once, and had a lot of cathing up to do with Puddles' story, so I focused on that. So I set yours aside, and came back to it recently. So glad I did. I really enjoy your story. Second, I wasn't sure how Daniel and Co. were going to bring the fight to Yawm and his followers. This chapter brought it all together, it's really starting to look like they have a chance to make a go at it, and I can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome writing!

Monsoon117

That was what I was going for this chapter. Torix's main motivation is a sort of excitement with living again. After hundreds of years of just sitting in a dusty library by himself, he's actually out in the world doing difficult and challenging things. His knowledge and skills are being used for something. He's doing things he never thought he would do. It's kind of like he's going through being young again.

Dialogues between Torix and Daniel give me a feeling that Torix is a child as every word is new to him and he is excited about every word and open eyes wide. I don't have a feeling that he is a thousand years lich who likes to read and experiment.

MAJmuffin

hod is amazing

Monsoon117

This is awesome to hear too.

Monsoon117

Excellent!

Ausie Brooks

Hod is the GOAT. I don't know whether I like your characters or your system more, but I like both a lot.

Pixelblade

I can just see torix and Daniel both laughing maniacally while discussing their plans (This chapter flowed really well btw. Good work)

Monsoon117

Pushing hard for another chapter before the end of the day. Thanksgiving took up more time then I thought it would.


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