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90 The Coming Tide

🕑 Added 2017-12-06 04:24:44 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Thanks for the link Monsoon17, and the laugh.. Shazzam!! :P I was thinking his ability with spoken eldritch magic could be weak at first (being because he may not know much in the way of eldritch words) so he may start of with a roar filled with power (perhaps it'd de-buff an enemy, make them confused or afraid) and later he could start to learn how to do interesting things.. like split open rifts the way the Sentinel spears do (you know, to get himself back home after he's trapped on the other side and his spear gets broken).

Scott Rutherford

That's a good question. I also wonder what Torix is doing (other than micro managing an army) now that he's decided to live his undead life and attempt to progress thanks to Daniel's example.

Scott Rutherford

You read that one too eh? :)

Thanks for the chapter! I am curious about one thing though - did Daniel share his theory on legendary skills with Torix?

Like the Devil Soul Language in Arcane Emperor? It's based on putting power and malice into words, and injuring or even destroying the soul with words.

Maritropa

Wish more authors did this, they seem to pull numbers out of their asses sometimes.

Monsoon117

*Charges spell* Shazzam! <a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1etMz6ISPhDb6LH6yOkaNbyxmnrkVVnF4GIo0wlOEbS8/edit?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1etMz6ISPhDb6LH6yOkaNbyxmnrkVVnF4GIo0wlOEbS8/edit?usp=sharing</a>

Scott Rutherford

I wish I had a list of his skills, it would help me when thinking of what might combine to make other mythic skills... One that has been on my mind is his Words of Power (the skill he gained from Torix, though slightly modified). I'd love to see it somehow combined with his ability to make Eldritch Runes. So, he can 'speak' a spell, or he can use his voice to enhance written runes and make them stronger and more full of intent.

It seems wrong?

This perpetual cycle of recreating yourself is what separates you from the masses. You have zero fear of failure. This is because you understand what Failure is. Failure is facing your weakness. Once you’ve faced your own weakness, you may fight it. Otherwise, you will never know.

No keep it as summonses. It sounds like torix lost his mind talking to Hod and starteed talking like him a little.

pukeofhurl

dunno if you still need the refresher but then is an adverb while than is conjunction/preposition I would rather have better quality more than quantity. Then there would be more enjoyment while reading. 2 simple sentances with proper uses though the sentances themselves may not be proper its been a long time since grammar school XD oh and thanks for the chapter these 2 sentances werent meant as a jab at you i just used them for examples love this story :D

Maritropa

Yeeaah, can already see Daniel hyped about getting a sweet-ass Legendary then promptly get curb stomped, lol.

Monsoon117

That is excellent to hear.

Ilan

A guy named Harbinger of cataclysm, disciple of the lich Torix of Wormhiill the necromancer, made into a symbol of resistance and hope; that made my day!

Monsoon117

This is good! I always want my readers to want more.

Daniel

I feel like an addict at the end of these chapters with this story.

Monsoon117

Ah yeah, just as another mention, a different reader pointed out how I messed up when and whenever a lot. I think I've fixed that over the last 5-7 chapters. That makes the writing cleaner, which is always a good thing. Keeping me on my toes is always a good thing in my opinion.

Monsoon117

That is not rude to point out, and thank you for doing so. I'll refresh on the differences between the two, then I'll try to iron out the habit from here on out.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Leonard Marchant

You mix up then-than a lot, idk if that's rude to point out but yeah. Just a heads up.

Monsoon117

Yes. I tried putting this damn chapter through grammarly, but it erased all my bold lettering. Last time I make that mistake again.

Matthew Clark

"This perpetual cycle of recreating yourself is what separates you from the masses. You have zero fear of failure. This is because you understand what Failure is. Failure is facing your weakness. Once you’ve faced your own weakness, you may fight it. Otherwise, you will never know" isn't this supposed to be bolded?

28th00

Althea learning to do adorable flirty texts while Torix lost all his pride after the 2nd day and just begged him to come back and take Hod away. Speaking of Metal Skin, I kinda want our MC to just peel back his armour and go "No, humans do not have grey stone skin either!" to him, ya know? That'd be like a good 1/4th of a chapter on arguments.

Monsoon117

I know. I love writing their conversations. I may have a chapter just about Hod and his adventures during the three days they spent together.

Arthur

Np, always enjoy Hod and Torix, they make things fun

Monsoon117

I bolded it already, so a refresh should fix that. Thanks for the help with the wording though.

Monsoon117

Apparently it was auto corrected to summonses. My bad.

Arthur

Also not sure but I don’t know if it’s just me or if “summonses” is wrong or if it’s just “summons”

Cole Mathews

"The Coming Tide(lvl 1) - Somethings cannot be stopped. You are among them. Enhances movement and reduces debuffs to movement. Effects of combat movement speed as well." isn't bolded, and I think it should be "Some things, not somethings.

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think about the chapter. I enjoyed writing it quite a good bit. Hod's always a joy to write. Him and Torix are just awesome when they're in the same room.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help Gabriel.

Gabriel

I'm not sure if it's helpful but, "Mythical skill gained!" isn't in bold font.


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