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91 The Final Rift

🕑 Added 2017-12-07 01:44:31 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

He very well could, though with time and whatnot.

For some reason I always read your name as moonsung117

Above the limits of the system when it comes to strength endurance and willpower... plz!

Can he start becoming ridiculously powerful soon?

Michael Berkowitz

Fucking evil vines, reminds me of blacknail and horses, I love Hod.

Scott Rutherford

No worries! Thanks for the chapter! :)

Scott Rutherford

No problem. Loving the story, can't wait for him to develop his own class. :) I've often thought of writing a story of my own where classes don't come pre-packaged and skills are pieced together over time to create a class. Love how you're doing it. The use of Titles and Paths is kinda nice too. Do titles actually do anything other than impress people?

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help Scott.

Thanks for the chapter! I loved how the vine tricked Hod

Scott Rutherford

Original: “I get it Hod. It’s just some friendly competition. There’s nothing with that.” Should be: “I get it Hod. It’s just some friendly competition. There’s nothing <b>wrong</b> with that.”

Monsoon117

I'm looking forward to writing the chapter today. to say the least.

MAJmuffin

*cue heavy metal music for the next chapter*

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Cole Mathews

Whoops, sorry about that. Then only pay attention to my first comment.

Monsoon117

They are. Dived is the more traditional one.

28th00

Wow, Abstractions are... Disturbing to imagine IRL. It makes sense for them to be so abstract since they're basically destroying the laws of reality between dimensions/universes just by existing. I can guess how that Legendary Skill is gonna come out if those things do what their description warned of though, that's gonna be interesting.

28th00

They're both past tense I think, not sure though.

Cole Mathews

Also, you used "dived" a lot. I think it's supposed to be dove, but I'm not sure.

Cole Mathews

Thanks for the chapter! One thing I noticed is, "It was a nice surprise as I against the side of a skyscraper." I think there should be something between I and against.

Thanks for the chapter, I love Hod.

Monsoon117

I hope you guys enjoy it because this chapter was pretty fun to write. I love describing new dungeons.


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