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🕑 Added 2017-12-10 07:04:40 +0000 UTC

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Tera grinned, “That’s what I’m hear for.” -> Tera grinned, "That's what I'm here for."

Monsoon117

I'm totally fine with these comments, so thank you for the help.

Scott Rutherford

I'm keeping a close eye out as I re-read this time through. I hope you don't mind if I report these types of things. Typo: "I looked beside me, seeing if something caused." Suggestion: "I looked beside me, seeing if something caused <b>it</b>."

Scott Rutherford

Ok, so earlier I was reading while at work so I didn't get the chance to say how awesome this chapter is. Thanks a ton!! I've been wondering about his armor for a long time. :) I made my earlier typo post while still reading the chapter, now I'm reading again (another typo found, I'll post it below). This Cypher stuff is great too. It's like normal runes are using a dummy coding language for babies, while the Cypher is a core level language that can seriously screw with the system (like an Admin). Or, one might say the normal runic magic system affects reality, while the Cypher system <i>creates</i> reality. :) Typo: "You aren’t going to find many beings that now it exists " Suggestion "You aren’t going to find many beings that <b>know</b> it exists "

Moar

Scott Keesler

Fair enough, thank you!

Monsoon117

I've got an updated version. I keep different states of it active at different times, otherwise it would spoil peeps that look at the newer one.<a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/155hozjp3O7jGejHRtZs1eSzn0IIigSmYwR-CP1j_5RI/edit?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/155hozjp3O7jGejHRtZs1eSzn0IIigSmYwR-CP1j_5RI/edit?usp=sharing</a>

Scott Keesler

Also, have you forgot about the Google Sheets? It’s pretty outdated at the moment.

Scott Keesler

Bro, you leave us on a cliff with the last chapter, then you leave us on another cliff. I can’t handle not knowing what’s going to happen because I don’t have money to pay. Also, very glad He isn’t totally screwed and not with Schema anymore, that was a good move, I got super worried.

Scott Rutherford

Typo: "With a new plan for it my head already" Suggestion "With a new plan for it <b>in</b> my head already"

Monsoon117

This is true, though the immortality is tied to killing eldritch. Torix and Kessiah haven't killed a level 1000+ eldritch in decades for example.

Patrick Ralston

On a somewhat unrelated note, it occurs to me that it really isn't that hard for someone above a certain level of power to live forever. based on what we've seen so far, level 1000 eldritch aren't that hard to find if one goes looking for them. For anybody who actually managed to reach level 1000 or so, they could probably manage to easily kill at least one a year without even having to invest all that much time and effort.

Ilan

Thanks for the chapter! Speaking of broken, invincible trees + his future health regeneration seems to fit although he may not have enough time to do it before Yamn.

Monsoon117

I know. Sorry about skipping an upload yesterday. I went Ice skating, which ended up rubbing the skin off my ankles. I wish I had just stayed home and wrote T.T

Mikkel

Oh god damn that's a cliff.

Monsoon117

That's a pretty fair set of assumptions to make. I'll change it so that he just eats with his armor. Thanks for the help Leonard.

Monsoon117

I'll try to finish it today. I'm pretty excited about the story right now, so that's very possible.

Leonard Marchant

I think Daniel should have known what the miasma jar was for, given his stats and what not. Seems really strange for him to try throw it away given what he was told about it and the items explanation.

Nice!

MAJmuffin

PogChamp this shit is dope

"Tera nodded, “Yes, really. It wouldn’t make much sense if Schema told you to kill Yawm then took away your only tool for defeating him. Schema is cruel, but he isn’t unfair.”" and then "Tera’s eyes opened wide, an inkling of fear creeping into his voice, “Did you say...Yawm? As in Yawm of flesh?”". Those two lines contradict each other. Either Tera knows or he doesn't till the harbinger brings it up.

Necroaura

I need the next chapter, just as closure

Necroaura

Dude you just dropped the worst cliffhanger on us. Could you do double release sunday or something?

Joshua Little

Sweet, evolution time. Now this I have got to see.

Daniel

I was wonder last chapter if you'd evolve the armor before the fight with a follower.

28th00

Well, that explains the exile. It was automatic and Schema had to grand permission after the fact. In other news, how does one become a living dimension?

striderfighter

Nice...it's cool to see someone slap him on the back and not kick him in the balls

Monsoon117

This chapter was hard to write, but it turned much easier towards the end. Hope you guys are excited about it. Let me know if something isn't quite right.


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