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102 Respite

🕑 Added 2018-01-05 20:36:46 +0000 UTC

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astrobubu

now reward me with an extra chap 😂😂😉

astrobubu

and there is much more of those little grammar issues. and don't u think i found all of them while reading, oh no no no. i simply used grammarly. google it if u don't know it. it is absolutely fantastic!

astrobubu

"Damn near noone.” -> "none" or "no one"

astrobubu

"The thing us, you shouldn’t be forced to.” -> the thing is "There's all kinds of projects" -> are all kinds "You’re level is your status now" -> Your

astrobubu

Typo: "The amor flowed down my back as I smiled"

"Diesel’s face turned solemn, “That all fringes on Yawm.'" fringes should be hinges I think.

Scott Keesler

Little bit of feels never hurt anyone, I know it didn’t hurt me. Nice chapter as always, and thanks

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

I love your comments. I look forward to them each time I post a chapter lol.

Monsoon117

I changed it up. Thanks for letting me know tuck.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help.

Samuel McCabe

She turned to Torix, “I’ll send Torix a message; seems should be I'll send YOU a message?

Tuck

"This makes this rifle very valued on the galactic market. When combined with another item giving a conduit towards Dimension C-138, then it’s near priceless." I would change " The rifle very valued something like this rifle valued very highly. It would flow a bit better. Also I'd take out the then on the then it's nearly priceless

28th00

I imagine the ending of this chapter to be like "Uh oh, forgot to reply to messages I got a few days ago! Better make a really nice gift to save my hide!" "Oh, she found me! Wait, she's not happy to see me and running to give me a hug? What'd I do? I'm in trouble? Oh crap! The gift! Hopefully I'll still have a private life with my Shape-shifting Silver Alien Waifu with a gift like this though!"

Monsoon117

Thanks Xwaderman

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Koby Mooney

I want her to shoot him with the new rifle, just to see what it does :)

MattMick222

Enjoyed the calm and new sense of responsibility from Daniel. More leader less monster.

Xwaderman

The struggle simple wasn’t there simple>simply

Pixelblade

Nice chapter! I do hope he'll mention poor Diesel.

Monsoon117

Thank you for the help Steven.

MAJmuffin

thanks for the chapter dude and I think there is a mistake in the final sentences . ''She looked at my had, her eyes opening wide. '' probally is head,

Monsoon117

Hell yeah. I will.

Eli Schreiber

Another fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work!

Monsoon117

Going to ramp up production again. I'm a writer dammit, not a web-site making, illustration, social media wizard.


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