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104 War

🕑 Added 2018-01-08 20:01:05 +0000 UTC

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Craig

"Somewhere like lions and tigers with fur made of steel." -> "Some were like lions and tigers with fur made of steel" "It it sucked the air in around it before he launched it." -> "It sucked the air in around it before he launched it."

Dax

Hey in one sentence the skill call overwhelming presence shouldn’t it be pressure

Intimidating Swan

He turned to me, “Show them what we are capable off, Harbinger.” -> He turned to me, “Show them what we are capable of, Harbinger.” Thanks for the chapter!

Stephen Emrick

Yeah hods other personality seems untrustworthy. He's eldritch and could betray Daniel because he agrees with eldritch having free reign in the world.

Monsoon117

Lol. This is true. I'm saving it for the start of next chapter.

Monsoon117

Thank you.

I have a bad feeling, something is going to go fuck'all, honestly expecting a betrayal of some kind. Nice chapter though.

28th00

Oi, what's with that ending? Daniel ALWAYS HAS A RETORT(witty or corny, a retorts a retort.) TO THESE KINDA ENDINGS!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Cole Mathews

"speech wit ha bang" should be "with a"

MattMick222

WOW

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help

striderfighter

Should be "I would whittle him down"

Monsoon117

Hell yeah.

Dead serious love this

Monsoon117

No problem Brett.

Brett Davis

Thank you

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy it guys. I also released a video on my youtube channel thanking you guys. I didn't want to release it on my patreon feed just because it might clog the feed up. I want 90-95% of the posts to be writing/chapters anyway.


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