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105 Betrayal

🕑 Added 2018-01-09 20:13:31 +0000 UTC

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Scott Keesler

This crossed my mind before too. Just imagine, Daniel is beating the absolute crap out of someone’s crotch but it looks like he’s hitting their face. Jokes aside, this is a seriously good point, it would throw a big curve in his fighting style and make him wayyyy more unpredictable, which is better. Oh, also, he could do a pincer strike by himself. Like, with one hand he hits a pad that hits the back of them and the other he punches them in the face, thus causing some serious damage and confusion to the person. Yes it would be a little awkward to punch both arms at the same time, but idk, you’re creative you could make it work, better than me that’s for sure.

Craig

Y'know, I had a thought.... so he transfers force via punching his telekinetic fields right? Why not just literally punch space, then transfer that force to ... I dunno, the back of whoever's head he is fighting? Then it is impossible to block unless you can somehow sense these fields and disrupt them which no enemy he has faced so far has been able to do...

Sohrab Kazak

Can we assume that Althea kept running away and was not just casually killed in whatever reality split thing that was?

Monsoon117

I believe it was his feet. If not, I'll change that description so that is the case.

Grevis165

How could Daniel reach up into his skull-hole if he was paralyzed from the neck down?

Monsoon117

I design them to drag you guys in, if that makes sense. Kind of like, "What? Betrayl? How so?"

Monsoon117

Thank you matt/mick.

Monsoon117

Yes, I changed that whole segment. Thank you for bringing it this up.

Brett Davis

Unlike with Elijah? Wouldn't it be Unlike with Dakhma?

Thanks for the chapter

not really, he's saying that the amount it would to break himself (daniel) is less than the amount that it would take to break elijah

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Just wanted to throw this out there, but at the start you have Daniel say, "Less than it takes to break you." Elijah said lets see how much it takes to break you, so it sounds like hes saying hes weak compared to elijah.

Monsoon117

I read the manga like, 7 years ago. It's been a long time. I remember the name though.

BirdsofPrey

Have you ever seen White Beard from "One Piece"?

James Lomele

Is it me or these titles seem to hint at the end of the chapter and not whats actually in the chapter.

Monsoon117

I did in fact mean that. Thanks.

Brett Davis

Dang it man, you had to leave the chapter here? Uggh :P (side note, I think you meant unmatched grace not unmatched grave)

MattMick222

Daaaaaamn. Daniel is a baaaaasd man. correction "The bones over the injured regenerated" injured area or injury maybe

Monsoon117

Good eye.

28th00

For those that didn't notice, it was Ajax's betrayal of Yawm since he killed the named ones and is asking Daniel to "Come". I expect a detailed explanation next, but I assume it's because Ajax finally has a way to stop Yawm? Who knows, the author does but I don't!

Monsoon117

That's a part of the mystery...ok, I'll change the chapter title to something less confusing.

Ausie Brooks

I'm confused, who was betrayed here?

Monsoon117

And so Daniel learns!

Arthur

Not waiting for your opponent to transform into something stronger is the smart thing to do, beat them while they are down 😎


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