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110 Yawm of Flesh

🕑 Added 2018-01-28 02:40:00 +0000 UTC

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Naoggeddon

Formatting is still odd on mobile

Darren Li

A Spicy chapter! Very wet chapter, no dry chapter here!

Monsoon117

thank you

Samuel McCabe

''monster teeth orbarbed wire`'' or barbed. ''people thatdoubt them'' that doubt.

Monsoon117

Thank you.

Monsoon117

Thank you. This is a classic mistake of mine.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to meet the legend.

MattMick222

since one is not dead i would go with eliminated

s476

the old saying goes, keep your friends close and your enemies closer. ---> isnt it : the old saying goes, keep your enemies close and your friends closer. ? or am i mixing it up

s476

thanks for the chapter! j

striderfighter

The hallways where all jagged....

striderfighter

*We have slayed the four followers* should that be slain?

MattMick222

Daniel really goes about getting himself in the right set of mind for his encounter with the Big Boss. He sets up his options rallies his troops inspires his followers. It is a real passing of the torch Torix is accepting of Daniels leadership. Oh and Damn you for the cliff :P

striderfighter

*the armor bended out of the way* ... should be "bent"

Monsoon117

Really? That's strange. Hopefully it doesn't detract from the story any.

Cole Mathews

The formatting seems weird. Like you hit the enter key several times randomly throughout some of the paragraphs.

Monsoon117

This cliff is pretty good in my opinion.


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