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111 An Enigma

🕑 Added 2018-01-28 23:08:58 +0000 UTC

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Stephen Emrick

A good analogy but it's not always that simple. Yawm unleashed plaque to prevent Schema from completely taking control of earth. It depends on you're philosophy. Whether or not you believe the ends justify the means and how bad you believe Schema to be. Thus the picture his space paints.

Chawki89

If we judge Yawm by his words he is a good guy. When he would start to win me over I easily thought of his actions. We judge a tree by the fruit it bears. Haha that actually works for Yawm perfectly. So yeah bad fruit, bad tree... Literally

Monsoon117

Well, there's the plague he set out on the city. That was a gruesome set of events. Yawm really messed the followers up too. He was a warrior king that rebelled against Schema. After seeing his impacts on people, I think it's a reasonable assumption that he is a bad dude.

Leonard Marchant

"I expected some bloodthirsty monster." What? Why? This seems kind of out of place given when we already knew of Yawm.

Monsoon117

It's an interesting question. How is Yawm able to understand Daniel? Well it could just be that Yawm is similar to Daniel. Daniel is a warrior who learned the cipher, just like Yawm. Yawm might be playing off that and other things he noticed about Daniel. It could also be Yawm having crazy high perception, charisma, and intelligence. It could even be a skill or something of the sort. There's a lot of questions here.

Alex Kagan

And now I'm wondering how fast Daniel can improve his Ciphering if he focuses on raising his perception and intelligence faster than just relying on Endurance gains to trickle downward.

Alex Kagan

It sucks when the bad guy that everyone's telling you is a completely stark raving mad lunatic genesplicing monstermaking d-bag instead makes all these rational arguments that you've made yourself. Perhaps Yawm knows these are Daniel's feelings too. Could this be what happens when using the Cipher to get perception and intelligence up in the thousands? Something pretty damn close to mind reading along with all the other senses a Prophyrian has like plant talking and wind whispering...

MAJmuffin

lmao, rip love story

s476

Seriously this chapter is good in so many ways: the atmosphere is tense, wondering when all will go downhill, the descriptions support it, the dialogue is funny and interesting (plotwise), yawn is title....So many questions which will hopefully be answered in the next chapters! great job ;)

Stephen Emrick

Well, first he would die. Then maybe Torix or Yawm would resurrect him somehow. I think actually telling Yawm no because she my future wife would have a better effect. Asking a man to hand his mate over being a "no dice" scenario, should be something Yawm understands.

Koby Mooney

I wonder what would happen if Daniel just up and punched him after that

Monsoon117

That's what makes Yawm so scary. He can win you over before you even fight.

Monsoon117

Good or bad?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Damn...

MattMick222

Bond, Yawm Bond

Kevin Ramos

Fuck! A villan with high charisma! My will is too weak!

Argetsword

Give me the one thing you value.... that’s going to be a problem lol

28th00

But, she's currently in the process of making another hybrid of extreme proportions! One is unstoppable force, the other immovable object. Just imagine what happens when a hybrid of those 2 mix?

Monsoon117

Thank you for compliment. I'm glad to see the flow of the writing is going well.

Sir Sloth

This was so smooth, oh man, this was good.

striderfighter

Definitely...

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy. Hopefully Yawm isn't exactly what you guys expected, in a good way.


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