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112 Confrontation

🕑 Added 2018-02-02 19:39:31 +0000 UTC

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Gigatony

Even with a strength stat in millions, Daniel shouldn't be able to move with balls of this size.

s476

,^this

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Cole Mathews

Damn. This has got to be one of my favorite chapters you've written. I loved the way you twisted Yawm from the scholar to the insane warrior, and the bluff was one of the greatest I've ever read anywhere. Seriously, thank you so much for this chapter.

Stephen Emrick

Worps minds and reality.

Stephen Emrick

I mean worps minds. I need to figure out how to disable auto correct. It's seriously driving me mad

Stephen Emrick

That cipher language is freaking dangerous. Works minds and reslity. Use it and you might not know whats what anymore.

Kevin Ramos

Nice

Monsoon117

When writing, it's a tough balance between focusing enough to keep a train of thought, and letting the mind wander to generate ideas. Often times I'll be writing with a train of thought before wandering off to something else mid sentence. Then I'll write down someone else's name. It creates a common, re-ocurring mistake with misnaming people.

Daniel

Bloody Brilliant. There is something about these scenes I can't put my figure on it, but in a good way.

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

Schema raised his hands? mistyping?

Monsoon117

Nothing close to the brink of death, but enough that Yawm would consider him a threat.

MattMick222

Well done Monsoon well done

Wow. Super good chapter. +1 at least, if not more.

Brett Davis

I have to ask... how much damage did he do to yawm, and how close was yawm to death?

Monsoon117

Man, you give the best damn comments BlissForgotten. They are really motivating.

BlissForgotten

Amazing, I am in love. Very few authors can have such a smooth transition from a basic human struggling against a bat in a cave to a literal fight between god like being (even if one is faking it.) Thank you for your time and effort as always and I await more!

Monsoon117

This was a tough chapter to write. I actually really enjoyed writing it, but it's hard just due to the nature of the scene. There's so much going on and so much at stake, and I was kind of scared to publish it. I can't really say why. Anyways, I hope you guys enjoyed it regardless.


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