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🕑 Added 2018-02-04 06:17:04 +0000 UTC

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Aaron

Damn that was chilling, a being with no will that does nothing but do as ordered just told him to run. You know Yawm is fucked up when that happens.

Grevis165

Thank you for the chapter. I'm loving the conflicted madness of Yawm. You have built an excellent character here.

Monsoon117

I sum it up in four words: It is a shitstorm.

Cody Adam Carroll

I started your story last week and I really like it. I was reading some of the narrative that people are putting out about GT and Qidian and it is really a complex problem. A translators work is considered that person's intellectual property so even if they are translating and monetizing it for Qidian to take the translations is illegal. They could sue for all money made off the translations or for the translations themselves but it is illegal for them to post someone elses translations. Qidian also has not marketed themselves very well to the community and whoever managed them when they first came out did it poorly they took everyone's current translation's added it to their site and then introduced a new translators who did the job poorly. Qidian actually has a really ingenous system that I love. x amount of chapters are free and then you have a 30 second to 1 minute ad that you can skip after 15 seconds before the two latest chapters and the best part is that unlike Gravity tales and wuxia world I won't get popup's on my cell saying that 100% of my phone has been taken over by viruses send me your Credit card info now. The idea that Gravity tales is a puppet of Qidian or bad people is false given the actions taken by both sites.

Stephen Emrick

Oh darn, this sounds bad. I hope this keeja isn't actually someone Daniel knows that has been turned.

Kevin Ramos

Nice

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Chris Vogt II

Awesome stuff, as ever. Thanks for sharing.

s476

I guess we do, especially the finish was great !

Yawm is... interesting. Yawm feels like a customer service agent. Tries to be, and generally is, civil when interacting with others, but that civility is a very thin mask covering an explosion of rage and violence. It doesn't take much for cracks to appear, showing what lies beneath, or for the mask to shatter entirely. Started off as top employee and when his managers saw he was coming for their job, transfered him to some backwater department, where he continues to work, aiming to supervise those that previously managed him, so he can educate/teach/lead/etc them 'properly'. #WeAreYawm

Monsoon117

I got this chapter done guys. I feel proud that I did. It was hard, but very satisfying. I hope you guys enjoy the madness that is Yawm as much as I do.


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