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129 A Chance

🕑 Added 2018-04-24 05:00:34 +0000 UTC

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Royce Gunter

"Amara, the Lost One(Time: Undefined) - We found the chink in his armor. Know we must dig our knife deep into the opening and twist." It should be "Now we must dig our knife deep...".

Darren Li

I NEEEEEED ITT!!!

Monsoon117

I'll be releasing a chapter later today most likely.

Stephen Emrick

Reader scratches arm, " Come in man Don't hold out on me! I need my fix!"

Monsoon117

Good point Tyler. Thanks for pointing this out. I added a bit of Amara mentioning a few bits of information about the angel and demon eldritch, like Gabriel. It should show that she has some juicy info about other eldritch too.

Tyler Babcock

Thanks for the chapter as always! One thing I really liked was the Lucifer comment, it seemed really appropriate. Though considering she has almost no reason to know of Lucifer or what that name means to Daniel, you should let Amara mention her reading a bit of Earth's history from the obsickle super quickly. Something I am sure is pretty new, but Schema would defiantly collect any sort of data like that, and after the charisma update would allow some of that data be avaivable for all to other races when new races are accepted into the system.

Dembed

Now that I have caught up to my saved up chapters, this will be an agonizing wait again. I wonder if he somehow will be allowed from Yawns side to go to fringe worlds to LVL UP. Nice chapters since your break, you are back in it.

Grevis165

I like Amarra's character! She is really quick to adapt to nee situations, and is knowledgeable about the system in ways Daniel isnt. I'm really looking forward to the combination of their mana generation and her improved runes.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Health: 1.39 Million/1.38 Million Current more then maximum To trust Yawm is to trust lucifer. Capital "L" for Lucifer After a bit of though, After a bit of thought,

Kurt A

Shouldn't he have the fringe walker class right now?

Efflorescence

11/9!

10/10

Monsoon117

A relatively fun chapter too write. I had to sleep on it for a few days just because the conversation had wide sweeping implications. It turned out pretty good in my opinion. Hope you guys like it.


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