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136 The Sound of Thunder

🕑 Added 2018-05-16 23:39:15 +0000 UTC

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Scott Keesler

A thought crossed my mind today. How does Daniel converse with Yawm who doesn’t have the system to help translate what Daniel is saying? I don’t think that Schema would help him talk with him when he doesn’t have it backing him. I get he has the pseudo-Schema currently but what about before them? Why would Schema allow them to make the contract or talking about mutiny as they did?

Monsoon117

Nope. I hope you enjoyed the extra chapter though, and the previous one is available now.

Heychsea

Hi, sorry for disturbing but this chapter is available for me but not the previous one. Was this supposed to happen?

Monsoon117

I just read it, and it's a very interesting idea. I don't know if I'll be able to implement them, but I have an idea of how to implement something similar.

Stephen Emrick

wow, I can hear the cricket's chirping! 5 days with no comments. Must be a worse idea than I thought possible.

Stephen Emrick

If they could master that, it would probably be an ability powered by willpower and would simply make the person appear to move faster and have faster reaction speeds.

Stephen Emrick

I had an interesting thought the other day. We don't really understand yet what consciousness really is. We know time is relative. What if consciousness effects time the same way gravity effects energy. The amount is normally not enough to be noticed. Time appears to move slower when you focus. We always assume that's just because our brains process faster but what if that's's not the only reason? Maybe someone could master such a thing under schema's system.

Maritropa

Around [is], a dense jungle grew. -> us

Maritropa

[they’re] exact location -> their ; of himself [to] highly for that -> too ; saliva [spatting] from her mouth -> spitting (not sure about this one tbh) ; Yawm pressed a [hands] onto -> hand ; higher chance [for] survival -> of

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Lolieat

Didn't he tell Yawm when he was fighting the levelers that he was weakening himself purposely? Yawm has never really pushed Daniel to his limits in his fights, either, so Daniel could easily say that he just hasn't shown his full strength yet, even if he's still weaker than Yawm. I think. If I remember correctly.

Grevis165

Daniel is going to have to be careful that he doesnt change his power too much from the last time Yawm saw him fight... Since he "doesn't" have Schema to boost his power up speed anymore. Or maybe he could use an excuse like "had a breakthrough with my Legendary skill" or something like that.

Monsoon117

I have several sheets of paper littered with their personalities, fighting styles, some primary skills, builds, and some backgrounds on each of them. I'm ready too.

Monsoon117

Thank you Sir Strider

Monsoon117

Ah man, that's a fantastic idea Tyler. I could even make it into a character building moment between the two of them. I also don't mind long comments at ALL. They're actually a lot of fun to read.

striderfighter

And what will you do her if I'm stuck here for eternity?

Alex R

Pretty good background for Amara. Really want to see the fight with the breakers though. See what all other creatures can do.

Tyler Babcock

Thank you for the chapter! Writing this before I read, so I hope it turns out just as good as the others. Edit: Near the end would have been the perfect time for Daniel to give the ring to Amara. Based on the way that Yamn reacted, he already guessed what Daniel's reaction was going to be. He could have reached for her hand and if he was able to give it, she could then tell if Yamn and him survive the fight against the Breakers. Edit 2 (Sorry about the long comment): You could even incorporate the usage of Amara's mana from the bond between them after he gives the ring.


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