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🕑 Added 2018-06-13 23:36:11 +0000 UTC

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metzjc

When Yawm attacks Daniel and dies the contract is invalidated due to Yawm breaks it.

pukeofhurl

i like to think of his armour in that state as like being similar to doc oc from spider man in that it retracts to his spine and can retract no further than that

Adam Nolan

"Know I do" should be now I do

Monsoon117

This is an excellent point. I'll add in an extra segment mentioning this point.

Jordan U

What about the servent guy? Going to leg him die?

Monsoon117

This will be elaborated on further into the story.

Damika

I love it, I love it soooooo much

Alex R

With his two legacies, can he combine them into one big one or create a second guild with the second legacy? Also is it possible for Daniel to get a second legendary skill/more mythical than the current 4 because the original ones were absorbed into force of nature.

Monsoon117

Thank you Chrome

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Alex R

That is interesting. Also with his two legacies, can he combine them into one big one or create a second guild with the second legacy.

Chrome

3,4,5 million a minutes would sound better as 3 million, 4 million, 5 million a minute

Wildebranch

Also, Daniel needs to be more knowledgeable about the Cipher to change Schema, like, Dimension Remake level proficiency haha

Thomas

I get that. Though it was mentionned the armor can get out of his way, like when he kisses Althea. So if it is his flesh that is also close to 3.55m that would mean he has a gigantic head to be proportionnaly correct with his height. Is that the case ?

Kasper Hermansen

What i ment wasn't his "level" but more the pace of his improvement. I guess I am just worried the story will end too soon. I might be too used to Xianxia, where reaching the max level means that the story will end. Thanks for clearing it up

Monsoon117

It's a class level bonus without getting a class.

Monsoon117

Eh, he can progress in other ways. Items, trees, skills, the dimensional cipher, etc. There's all kinds of ways for him to progress.

Monsoon117

Taking the armor off of Daniel would be like taking your bones and ligaments out of a human body.

Monsoon117

It's been 2-3 years for Daniel. Time in the rifts has extended it. In real time, it's only been about 1.3-1.4 years.

Alex R

Oh wow. Then I really was confused. I assumed it was the same thing.

Monsoon117

The speaker class raises the level cap by 3k. If Daniel became a speaker, he'd have a 11k level cap.

Lolieat

Yeah but Daniel's got this powerful in what? 1 year? In 1000 years what's to stop him from just barging in to Schema's systems and changing him?

Alex R

Okay that makes sense. I know 3k levels is huge, it's that the obliterate 1 and 2 trees gave him stats while the new one gave levels. It confused me since it's almost like a different tree. Since you had talked about Speakers in Ch 93, I think it might have been less confusing to say Speaker status awarded or something to that regard instead.

Monsoon117

I'll add in a line, "Well, we didn't kill him. Hod did."

Monsoon117

Obliterator 3 increases the level cap of Daniel, but that's pretty much it. A 3,000 increase in the level cap is HUGE though, and that will be shown later on in the story and next chapter. You are also right about the willpower perk. I will add that in.

Alex R

A couple of questions after rereading: 1) shouldn't daniel have gotten a perk for 10k willpower like he did for 10k endurance 2) what specifically does obliterate 3 do, is it only a level raiser or does it also give stat points like the others

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

But his stats will increase at an exponential rate thanks to the "eldritch runes" so why worry about levels?

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

Given that the armour rips as it is to small for him every time he put stats in I'll say it is his metal flesh and liquid metal blood body.

Kasper Hermansen

Great conclusion. I feel incredibly pleased that the world will open up around Daniel. So that we can get some more world building and badass moments. The only thing I am worried about is Daniels level, it seems that his growth will stagnate, at least story wise.

MAJmuffin

hell yeah

Thomas

I'm confused about Daniel's size. Is 3.55m his armor's size ? Or is it his actual flesh and blood body that is 3.55m ?

s476

Awesome chapter!

xSzakix

He means what he said, Daniel is the highest leveled being on Earth, and certainly the most powerful within a few thousand light years lol.

Pixelblade

I'm so excited! I just can't hide it!~ Really looking forward to what's next. Torix in love... please make it happen (Hod would have a field day) the hilarity that could ensue...

Kurt A

It probably means member of the native species.

Dominic Pernicone

I was worried this chapter would mean a hiatus for you, but it looks like you're rearing to go for more. Thanks for the chapter, I love it 😃

Ashrothe

Yeah both books are good... and iirc part of the 3rd is on RR but yeah - unfinished.

Alex R

They've got almost 1k? years to figure something out. With how smart and resourceful Daniel is, he could figure something out.

Alex R

He technically doesnt have to go to Gliese 667, he can send Torix or someone else that is good at talking to people and have them be the ambassador. Maybe Kessiah, shes been pretty useless up to this point. Could be a redemption style arc for her.

Lolieat

Also, on the Ambassador of Earth quest description, it says “highest leveled native species on Earth” I think it should be highest level native being on Earth.

Lolieat

What’s Schema’s plan here? Just hope that Daniel’s contract is destroyed by an Old One? Hope that Daniel just never gets powerful enough to attack Schema?

Intimidating Swan

You are going to jail my good sir. Because what you've created.....it's a drug!!! I need more. But nah, good shit and I look forward to more as always~.

Damn getting Hyped for the next chapters but I definitely think Daniel needs to get rid of his bounty. Hope he does it by going to Gliese 667 so that he could also start the ambassador thing while finding a criminal organization to crush.

Lolieat

I think he was referring to the fact that Hod killed Yawm, which is why the contract didn’t fuck Daniel over.

Kevin M

Uh the first line "Well, we didn't kill him. " was that a mistake? They did kill Yawm or am I missing something obvious?

MattMick222

"Know I do. should be now. Very satisfying wrap up.

Alex R

What does Obliterator3 do? Is it only just giving a higher level cap?

Monsoon117

I've read it. I loved it.

Monsoon117

I love the gam3.

Slim Dakhch

thx for the chapter, but do give the gam3 a read, its a great story to get ideas from

Monsoon117

What do you mean by overdoing things? Just curious.

Maritropa

H Y P E, excited for the galactic scale adventures of the gang

Ausie Brooks

So glad this isn't the last chapter, shits gonna get CRAZY NOW YES YES YISSSSSSS

Benjamin Samuel

I'm looking forward to this, everything will be new and honestly looking forward to a change of environment where yawn isn't the focus. just don't fuck up by overdoing things

Cole Mathews

I'm really excited to see how the other planets function. That was really what drew me into a different story, The Gam3, but unfortunately that story looks kinda dropped. I really love your work, and I hope that you have a fun time writing the following chapters!

Nathanuel Vine

Awesome chapter got me hyped up for what's to come

Isaac Booth

first

Monsoon117

This was a really long chapter guys. It was 4,500 words with stat sheets and the quests. It took a while to brainstorm them, so that delayed the chapter for one day. I feel good with how it all turned out though. I'm going to immediately start writing the next one because I am PUMPED to write these next following chapters. Like, I cannot wait to get started on the other stuff I have planned. I'm excited just thinking about it as I write out this comment.


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