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151 Icosah

🕑 Added 2018-07-21 21:58:19 +0000 UTC

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Pretentious Slime

I predict that he will probably let the guy fire and just walk away, or immediately kill him with gravity, or just slip into the ground. Or just prove his point by transferring all of his weight onto the guy.

Monsoon117

Ohhhh. Heh.

Kurt A

I meant the name. Icosah, Icosahedron?

Monsoon117

I'll adjust some of the descriptions. It's a basically a street with all the guilds on it. On one end was the Steel Legion and the Agents of Schema. On the otherside is The Empire of the Soldiers of Fortune. On that end, there's tons of shops that have grown to serve the incoming aliens. Hope this clears things up so you don't have to reread the chap.

Monsoon117

It will become more apparent in more developed parts of Giess. On well fully developed worlds(100 years of Schema+), that kind of mentality will be everywhere.

Tommy Littlefield

True but more so a cliff cause now I don’t know if Daniel will be calm and not puss off the people that have to be allies with or if he will just snap and kill like everything on the planet that dares to stand against him haha but he will probably just go the calm route :/ haha

Alex R

Idk if I'd consider it a cliff when Daniel is in no real danger.

PloofDoodle

It did

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

That is interesting info. any way to incorporate that into the story?

Kurt A

Does this town have 20 sides?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Keen to see what happens when Dan just walks through the gunfire like it is rain.

s476

Good chapter: the balance between description and action is good, i think espen would make a great plant pokemon ;) Only shame is that I/we now have to wait some days till we see the ogres, more like goblin for daniel, failure.

Monsoon117

This is very strange. For me it all looks the same. Edit: I just tried resizing it to all the same kind and size of font. Did it help?

PloofDoodle

I don't know why but the font size changes 2/3 of the way through the chapter.

Monsoon117

Most people don't have to do what Daniel did to reach 1,000. There are schools, programs, and specialized tactics for gaining levels safely. As you reach into the upper quadrant of levels, that's when it becomes very difficult to gain levels. Technology isn't a godsend anymore, and armor is torn apart like paper. Being in a group can become a disadvantage.

Jeremiah Paltridge

Yeah, although I feel like for those living under the system 'analyse' should just be second nature. Like, a few hundred levels can make all the difference for those in the shallow end of schema's pool. If you've ready any wuxia/xianxia novels, you're familiar with the 'unreasonable young master' stereotype. For those that survive to reach anything over a thousand on a hostile planet it just seems silly for analyse not to be a reflex reaction before messing with anyone.

Tommy Littlefield

Hate ya for that cliff but good chapter haha

Lolieat

Ah, alcohol. That explains everything.

Monsoon117

Their in a random border town in the middle of nowhere. Fighters are very rare and usually unsuccessful. Combine that with the fact that this guy being in the middle of his guild and drunk, he's feeling pretty brazen.

Zachary Smith

ohhhh shit

Jebz

Aren't they cloaking themselves so they can't be analyzed? Would be dumb to go against a guy who's at the level cap.

Lolieat

Given that everyone (I think) has access to analyze/identify/I don't know wouldn't it be smart to analyze someone before shooting them? Especially so given that from the fact that he said his feet would go through the floor and the fact that he's so tall he probably mainly invests in constitution.

Monsoon117

It should be. Fixed.

NorkNork

“I thought you said plants at the front of the store are 3?” “14 four you.” Shouldn't that be a for instead? Shouldn't Steel Legion always be capitalized as a proper name?

Monsoon117

You're actually correct. Didn't realize it had gotten so high.

Monsoon117

Let me check. *opens status* Cliff-Hanger(lvl 100) - Some people make a story predictable and straightforward. You prefer putting in twists and turns. +100% to readers wanting to see the next chapter.

ja nein

it seems you have mastered the art of the cliffhangers too :)

Kevin Ramos

I don't know weather I want to see the gun work(barely at that), or fail spectacularly.

MAJmuffin

also, shrekt? (the drunk guy)

MAJmuffin

good stuff my dude

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. Hope you enjoy it.


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