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156 Eonoth

🕑 Added 2018-08-17 03:35:31 +0000 UTC

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MistRaker

It's great that you also have a dedicated group that are willing to help you with fixing errors

Monsoon117

I can do better. I've finished my cut and gotten my sleeping schedule in order. I'm hoping that by stabilizing my diet and sleep, I'll have more energy and resources to put into writing.

MistRaker

Seems like updates have slowed down a lot. Your writing is getting better though so it's hard to complain.

Itisn1tmyname

the thing is, if the gravity well becomes deep (strong) enough to affect light (and gamma rays), then it'll be at a strength where the gamma rays are not longer important. Making it just absorb gamma rays on the other hand is impossible with just gravity manipulation (the skill) as gravity alone affects all matter the same. So he'd need to invent a spell that somehow filters what is affected by his gravity skill and set it to "only gamma rays". I am pretty sure this is beyond his abilities at the moment. The lich could help

Itisn1tmyname

That falls under Charisma, though.

James Witt-Larsen

If it has no set time limit for when he needs to use the damage rebound it would make a good opener for a arena fight at a future date.....*hint hint*. It's not like it's a skill called "Return to Sender" and has a set target either.

Monsoon117

I doubt there's many scenarios where that would be a good idea compared with just using the singularity on someone. That's a cool idea though.

Lolieat

Poor Etorhma's getting sidelined by the others, apparently. So is he a young old one? But if they transcend time.... I have no idea where this is going.

Pretentious Slime

Could the harbinger use the mini black hole trick to wipe part of his health so that he could punch someone with even more force then necessary using that weird skill he used against yawm?

Lolieat

"It give it value, something I cannot comprehend."

Pretentious Slime

Another thing is, recently I watched a video about dangerous store bought lasers. Apparently they are not made according to safety procedures so they emit both a laser, and a gamma ray. Which, if pointed into someone’s eyes, could blind them almost instantly and perminately. Well anyway I had an idea for a non lethal but cruel way that the harbinger could stop his apponents(relatively if used right). So his weird reverse black hole spell he uses could potentially suck in even light. I was thinking, what if he focused solely on pulling in light and then launching out primarily gamma rays? That would do some serious damage to not only the eyes but, well anything that lives if exposed to a lethal amount of it. Anyway this is just a theory and I don’t know the full science behind lasers but it’s a cool thought. [edit]- so I looked it up, and I found out that gamma rays are also used to treat cancer. Seems that having th ability’s to emit gamma rays could be even more cruel then I thought lol.

Pretentious Slime

I couldn’t help but think about eonoths words of power(or pain lol) ... I thought, the harbinger would be even cooler if he somehow was able to project himself through words. What if he could project his will, his immovable soul, onto someone else. Through his words alone. Of course instead of gradual damage to health, it would make his apponent hesitate. They would have a strong urge to fallow what he sais, especially if they have less willpower. The ability would be called, Wills Order, or Call of the Will. Or something like that. Sounds cool, just putting it out there.

Grevis165

It has its p"erks," and he will gain 700-some path points for the dimensional cipher leveling up, correct? Which he will use to hopefully round out a path and get another perk. Ba-dum tss! Lol, well done Monsoon.

Pretentious Slime

Danials definitely something else, and it looks like there are other higher entity’s potentially stronger then the rest, like eonoth. I wonder if there is some strange hierarchy, or maybe they are each individually stronger in their own unique way. But it sounds to me like this new entity is beyond the others you have mentioned/shown in the past. The only reason I say that is because yawn himself isn’t as tanky as danial and he seemed to have survived encountering one of these beings, which could emply that they were weaker then eonoth. Idk.

Scott Frederiksen

Awesome, can't wait to see how much the cipher will evolve now.

Monsoon117

Thanks Tyler. I added, "I wrapped a cord of my armor around them, holding them in place." to the first sentence.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help Kevin Fixed.

Monsoon117

This is a temporary shift until his perception is a bit higher. He wants his perception to be higher before doing this tournament, otherwise he could exposed to a large audience very quickly.

Monsoon117

There is definitely Lovecraftian influences in my work. I', a big fan of Lovecraft and I feel like he's the best horror writer of all time behind Stephen King.

Monsoon117

I wanted it to be unsettling. Some Old Ones aren't meant to be contacted with. Eonoth is one of those old ones.

Tyler Babcock

A couple mistakes that I notice after a second reading. "I wrapped my around a few of them" Not sure what my is? "He voice echoes in your mind long after he has left." First He should be His.

Tyler Babcock

The total stats he has gained overall from the chiper.

PloofDoodle

Each time we see the added stats gained from the cipher, are those added each time to Daniels total stats or are the stats we see in the update the total stats it added to him?

s476

Never mind that dude, your pic(or rather not pic) is moving.....

Maritropa

And I just imagined Schema blowing a circuit in the background after witnessing a "Small increase" in an absolutely no-no skill xd

.TheFear

Hey nice chap, good job mate. Check out your first sentence though "The hollow eyes silver starred at me for a second. " should be "The hollow silver eyes stared at me for a second. "

ja nein

wouldnt it be wiser to either keep spending points on endurance now since it becomes harder to gain stats there or to wait spending his level up stats until he hits his softcap with the cipher in all the other stats? seems like it would be a waste to spend his points on perception how he originally planned it if he coudl just keep gaining them through the cipher

Joshua Little

Can't wait to see what he can do with his new cipher. Time to finish a rune for each stat now and upgrade the old ones. Thanks for the chapter.

28th00

Reminds me of what's his name, the universe incarnate from Lovecraft... Azaroth? I can't remember his name, but he's the literal universe itself, and kills people by literally giving them knowledge, at least I think it was him... Poor mortal minds, he tries so hard to not break them.

Pixelblade

Awesome

Gardor

Did you... delete my comment? I'm sorry for offending you

Mason Sudul

Eonoth was perfect though imagining Daniel melting while still carrying on a conversation was very strange

REPOsPuNKy

He is worthy... To become a fellow deity. An enduring one, a creator. In short, a God.

Gardor

Was he wearing the grey cover armor when absorbing the cult slivers and making his armor wall and stuff? Says he ripped part of it off when bleeding for Eonoth. Also, with what seems like the really fine control he has over the armor, is he ever gonna try to condense it into a torc or something? Also also, now that he/it IS the dimension, does it matter if it's covering his whole body (the main restriction from the original armor)? Those passive aggressive "for now you're using me, but soon I'll be wearing you" status updates from the armor seem to have gone away too. I understand if he WOULDN'T condense it due to paranoia/common sense/viewing it as natural, but I think it should still be addressed. Would be a great way to go icognito honestly since like two people have seen him without armor. Great chapter! Like the power disparity between old ones, with "weaker" ones being easier to get along with.

Kevin Ramos

Cheat codes unlocked

Monsoon117

Hell yeah. Perfect.

Cant wait to see what happens next. Good stuff.

Gabriel

I thought it was good and that Eonoth felt good and different enough from Etorhma but still a proper eldritch god vibe.

Connor Alexander

Thanks for the chapter!

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. This was a fun chapter to write. I had writers block for a few days then BOOM, wrote this chapter over two days. I felt pretty good about it, but I'll let you guys decide if it was good or not.


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