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🕑 Added 2018-09-12 02:17:58 +0000 UTC

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Jeff091

hi, thanks for the chapter

Pretentious Slime

He’s easily city teir if you throw in some special cercimstances. I mean city teir as in wiping out an entire city in a single hit. He could, he would just need someone like yawm to punch him, and then he would have to punch back using his perk accept in the direction of a city. So city teir with special cermstamces. And I’m sure he could probably wipe out a city even without that weird skill of his given some time. Also it depends on the city size. I also think that he has enough ability’s to figure out how to do such a massive aoe if he really wanted to. Which he doesn’t lol.

pukeofhurl

August was last month you mean october?

Alex R

Sorry, I meant in terms of comic book powers. Like Luke Cage is mid street tier, Spider man is upper street/neighborhood tier, luffy is more city tier, superman is planet, etc.

Monsoon117

He's definitely one of the strongest guys on Earth. He's not the strongest on Giess.

crusty pickle

no problem, i was getting a little worried because it was almost 2 weeks now

crusty pickle

august?

Brent Thomas

Next chapter please?

Monsoon117

Probably halfway through august is my guess.

Monsoon117

I'm still here. It's hard to edit on one part of the story then write somewhere else thousands of pages ahead. I hope this makes sense. I'll try to get a chapter out today/tomorrow though. It would be a nice break from all the grinding work.

Sanairb

Geez I hope not. But, it has been a while.

this could be the end

Alex R

How strong is Daniel right now? In terms of like street/neighborhood/city/etc?

crusty pickle

next chapter?

crusty pickle

i'm assuming he got inspiration from dragon ball super to do a tournament arc

MistRaker

Any time frame on when the first book will come out yet?

Stephen Emrick

I think you got auto corrected. I think you mean " has met every expectation".

Demonuss

Oh how I have been looking forward so much for this arc, and so far has met every exception. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Rhapsody

Thanks for the chapter, tournament arcs never fail to get me hyped!

racktrack

You'd probably like what he wrote tbh

racktrack

He's the (presumed deceased) author of the "Dragons Wrath" series of LitRPG novels. After releasing his last book a few years ago he dropped off the face of the planet, and due to what we know of his health struggles it's believed that he has passed away.

Pixelblade

The importance of being Earnest

Monsoon117

Who's Brent Wroth?

Monsoon117

Personally, I don't think it's a suggestion. Look at game of thrones. It only copies elves, dwarfs, swords, magic, dragons, and many other details from the novels. Even then, Game of Thrones is hugely popular despite being a different take on Tolkien's universe.

Monsoon117

There are several sects of the gialgathens. Some of them believed that the espens rise to power was a good thing since it shook the Gialgathens from their position of power. Some gialathens believe it's retribution for enslaving a race for so long. Other sects believe that it's an afront to their superiority, and that the espens should be eliminated. I'll be showing all these sides as they explore Giess. Alzoroth is meant to be a display of the stereotypical gialgathen, one that's condescending, self superior, and arrogant as hell. Other gialgathens will show much more depth.

Koby Mooney

Can't wait for Daniel to fight Alzoroth

Koby Mooney

Thank you Monsoon117 for this chapter.

crusty pickle

incorrrect, i think he got killer of many for the eldritch? if im not mistaken

s476

So soon after I asked for a release date, love ya!

racktrack

Was starting to thing you had pulled a Brent Wroth JK, good luck with the editing

Grevis165

And by modern fantasy, I mean fantasy as a whole, not just sci-fi and fantasy together in one universe

Grevis165

Lord of the Rings IS the best thing ever! Lol. There are many who suggest that Tolkien started the modern fantasy genre with his works :)

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Laevus Deus

Oh you bastards. Couldn't let us read how badly Danny boy tears the fake dragon a new ass!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Connor Alexander

TOURNAMENT ARC TOURNAMENT ARC TOURNAMENT ARC Also thanks for the chapter!

Zachary Smith

liked the chap a lot. looking foward to more

Shawn Liu

I've been doing a reread and noticed some small inconsistencies. Would you want me to list them out for you as I go? One example is, Daniel gets a skill for killing bats, but he doesn't get skills for mass killing other things later on (like the eldritch spawn that populate Yawm's fortress for example). This seems like inconsistent worldbuilding..

Prinny Knight

Looking forward to the next one -dood- Keeping me on the egde of the arena in anticipation -dood-

Gabriel

It's looking good but I hope there are gilgathen's that can see the danger they are in and how the system may even be trying to get rid of them. Seeing beings that used to be muuuuch weaker than them becoming so strong so fast at least on time scales they should see as fast should be deeply alarming to them and I can't see them not having multiple plans to survive and not be enslaved. I hope that Alzoroth is more aware than it seems and seeing as he has seen first hand the changes of the espens. Edit: Basically I hope Alzoroth isn't the arrogant strong guy from web novels that is there just to be beat and to be an all around idiot to make other's look better.

Thank you for the chap

Alex R

It looks good. Can't wait for Daniel to fight him.

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy. It was hard to write because I was exhausted towards the end. Let me know if I messed anything up. I'll check the comments tommorrow. I gotta go to bed.


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