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160 The Might of a Gialgathen

🕑 Added 2018-09-26 23:26:49 +0000 UTC

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Augustus

Mean. All the well frogs now hate you.

Jeff091

hi, thanks for the (for me) new chapter

Monsoon117

Thanks. I reframed it to gray armor, protecting his identity.

Stephen Emrick

Hopefully Daniel calls him a dragon-frog during the fight. I want to see him get mad. Then wipe the smug off his face. I read a comic parody once where Draco malfoy challenges Hermon granger to a duel and before he can cast a spell gets kicked in the nuts. Dumbledoor says listen young wizard no amount of magic will protect you from a swift kick to the nads. That's the amount of humiliation I feel the gialgathens need.

Monsoon117

Ah, dragon frog is more of an insult than a description. There much closer to amphibious dragons, both in presence and appearance.

Monsoon117

Ah, thank you. That's my mistake. I'll adjust what the announcer says to something like: "And here's the semifinals before the last fight!"

Maritropa

Just what I needed after a tiring day, good luck with the grind Monsoon :p.

Grevis165

I love that he's fighting dragon-frogs. And that you fused the two. And for more fusions. Will he eventually bathe in their blood, and gain the power to transform into a dragon and rule over all other dragons in the Dragon King festival? Or will he learn from them as a friend, and gain the ability to use their magic as a Dragon Slayer? Find out next time in Fairy Tail: The New World

MAJmuffin

nice

Laevus Deus

You sir are a Damn tease! LoL

Kevin Mendoza

The torix armor disintegrating is a contextual typo

Hana Buechel

Sooooooo good! Love your book sooooo much. I’m needing the next chapter, you can’t just leave us in the middle of a fight!!!!

I knew something didn’t feel quite right about this chapter so I reread that the last one and in the chapter before this one the announcer said that the fight between Iasis and Alzoroth was gonna be the last fight of the day, however in this chapter Daniel and Alzoroth fight immediately after the earlier fight.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter but that tease at the end was brutal

panfam

Rorschach in The New World, with full back story please

xydra22

I'm on my phone, or I would have made it look better. Hope you understand what I'm trying to say.

xydra22

I'm not entirely sure, but I think you were using Speaker as a proper noun, and there were places you used speaker, a simple noun. These two are interchangable, so I don't know. I laughed at that, surprised by how petty a Speaker could be. Kiki Mosk, The Smiling Devil(lvl 9,000) - A speaker representing Schema on Giess.

crusty pickle

new chapter! YEET

Tyler Babcock

Happy to see a new chapter. Sad to see how far apart it is from the last one, but that just means the beginning chapters are getting edited that much more, so I am fine with it. Looking forward to the next one or the release of the amazon book. Whatever comes first.

Monsoon117

Thanks Connor.

Monsoon117

Naw, bo really fits the contextual basis for the connotation between the metaphorical representations of the thematic resonance of mental and physical variables....Or it could have been a typo. lol.

Karolus

"Iasis is getting crushed, bo mentally and physically." I think this is supposed to be "both" not "bo"

Alex R

Let's go Daniel!!!

Connor Alexander

Alzoroth whipped his tail. <alzoroth> slowed down, trying to dodge the tail's whip. Alzoroth slowed down the shifting momentum in his tail to match it. <alzoroth> - Iasis Kiki Mosk, The Smiling Devil(lvl 9,000) - this just isn't bolded correctly. He was <struck> in here with me. <struck> - stuck

28th00

Well, ain't he a big arrogant garden snake?

Monsoon117

Gah, that's embarrasing. I fixed two instances of it at the beginning.

Monsoon117

Damn. I'll go back and look at it. I knew when I posted this that my brain was fried. Sorry guys.

Connor Alexander

Also right off the bat, in the first fight Alzoroth is fighting Alzoroth. Mighten need to switch those to Iasis.

Gardor

I think you use Alzoroth incorrectly a couple times in the beginning

Thank you for the chapter

Connor Alexander

Yay a new chapter! Thanks for it!


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