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🕑 Added 2018-10-22 20:25:09 +0000 UTC

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Xwaderman

I caressed my hands down hips her hips, also small i Caprika put her clawed on her hips clawed - claws or clawed hands

Pretentious Slime

Awesome, super happy when you respond to my comments 😁

Monsoon117

Yeah, I could write up a few descriptions of factions overall goals. The Harbinger's Legion would probably be something to this effect: A group of humans organized to fight a threat that threatened their world. With the looming threat neutralized, they find themselves in a seat of power on their newer world....

Pretentious Slime

Megh, once he begins to rule his own city, it will be much like the harbingers legion. Which isn’t exactly a bad thing. Though, what does the harbingers legion stand for anyway? Recently I’ve been play a lot of warframe, each faction usually being supported by a certain race or mindset. What they all have in similar is that they all have something greater to pursue. The harbingers legion, for some reason, doesn’t have a goal in its description. Like, ā€œDevoted to the persute of knowledge over powerā€, or ā€œEnders of Chaosā€, or maybe a more detailed one ā€œA legion built off what remained of a dying world, their goals aren’t too clear yet, despite that they are not a group to be trifled with. Tread lightly.ā€

Kurt A

They can still rise to become the leadership in their respective tier. I'm assuming that the elite of tier 1 are living like average tier 3 or 4 citizens.

Anon_Anon

Doesn't Daniel have something akin to literal balls of steel now? That must have been quite a kick to go through his Endurance and pain resistance. Or is the groin a weak point that you can attack to fully bypass pain resistance? Jokes aside, the Empire seems kinda inefficient if they're limited to 1 rankup per generation. If someone with amazing potential rose up within the lower rungs, won't they just abandon the Empire and go somewhere else? How does the Empire lock down outbound migrants from the lower rungs?

Pretentious Slime

Adding onto the teir system I made up, in order for danial to reach teir 8, he would have to be in a whole other level of OP. Teir 9-10 and your going into some form of omniscient/broke type shit. That’s why I said that the gap between each teir is rediculous. That is why I added the 3 letters per teir so that ranking someone wouldn’t become overly complicated.

Pretentious Slime

I forgot that he was gifted with even more power from that astral being. So I told that one guy that he could be easily city level with special cercumstances, but now I’ll have to change that. Let’s put city level into 5 tiers. Teir one being a town about a 2-3miles in radius. I would put him at that level easily with special cercumstances. Now however, that is up for debates. Sadly I don’t have enough evidence to accurately gauge what lvl of city he is at on terms of strength. But I’ll play it safe and put him at CITY LVL 1. If your wondering wtf I’m talking about, I’m talking about Daniels lvl of strength in relation to some guys comment on how danial would be rated according to comics. City lvl 5 would be destroying an entire super city about the size of New York or bigger. Bare in mind that New York is so big that it has different areas to catigorize certain parts of it. Example: Manhattan, brooklyn, and three others. This assessment is also based off the premise that danial could probably destroy a reasonable sized town in an instant if he so chooses and with the right combinations of ability.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

fixed.

Mason Sudul

This was the best bday present

Frederic Vincent

'the espens gained a lot of freed' -> freedom

Kessiah finished her beverage, tossing it into a garbage bin, "Since Schema came along, the espens gained a lot of freed. Saw a misspelling on the last part hope it helps last word rest is reference

Monsoon117

Would mind explaining further? Just wanting to understand better.

Pixelblade

I feel like they became a bit too casual too quickly with Caprika

Monsoon117

He disperses his weight over a wide area using Force of Nature and Overwhelming Presence.

I'd say including both (probably with an ironic comment from Daniel since he is American) would be a good fix if you want empirical

Thank you for the chapter

Phaeth

Good Chapter, thanks. PS: Please replace empirical with imperial

Gardor

Great chapter so happy it's back! You said torix had no "agency" to leave, I think you meant urgency. Also how does Daniel ride in a car doesn't he weigh as much as a planet these days?

REPOsPuNKy

100% enjoying all the new detail. Honestly, your writing is high enough quality that small changes here or there don't change how the novel feels, so please keep at it!

Monsoon117

Hell yeah. This is good to hear.

Connor Alexander

Ooh what a cliffhanger! Thanks for the absolutely amazing chapters!

Kristoffer

Nice chapter, I have to admit though, I really want to see want kind of crazyness Daniel can do with his powerd up cipher abilities

Alex R

Can't wait for more. Finally was able to get over the addiction but now it is back.

Monsoon117

Hope you guys enjoy the chapter. It was a lot of fun to write with some surprising depth. I also adjusted my planning process since editing the novel. Let me know if the chapters 'feel' different. I'll adjust accordingly.


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