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163 A Dark Plan

🕑 Added 2018-10-23 19:28:48 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

Oh yeah, these are good thoughts. I think Daniel's actions reflect this mindset though. Even if he's accepting payment for jobs, he's still doing jobs that help people. Him finding whoever killed the espens is another part of that. He's still trying to find someone to give him the red dungeon cores he needs. That will improve his skills dramatically once he finishes the Legendary tree. He's also working on his runic glyphs with a long term mindset instead of a short term one. I think Daniel's finally reached a stage in his life were he can afford to give a shit what other people think about him. Even then though, he's not catering to the people around him. He's merely aware of what they might be thinking now.

Pretentious Slime

Just something to think about. After Daniels experiences on earth, I kinda was under the impression that Daniel would be smart enough to realize that he is destined to be in some sort of conflict. So I am curious, has he thought that it is more wise to be constantly prepared for the next citastrophy, or does he simply think that it is impossible for another event at the yawm level to happen. If so, I would advise that he change his outlook on, well, many things. There are too many red flags for the harbinger to just take it easy all the time. I’m not suggesting that he taking it easy, but I believe Daniel can work on his relationships all while focusing on the future, and in doing so making himself much stronger. Kinda like you, working out a work schedual for writing I guess lol. I do enjoy his increased perceptive skills, but I don’t think they should get in the way of his growth and development. I noticed that he is consirned about his outward appearance, more specifically around friends. To me that is a challenge he can simply solve by proving his character through actions as words will undoubtedly not work with his rather lacking amount of charisma. A man with a reputation is a man that people find it easier to talk to. I don’t think Daniel should worry to much about what his friends think, especially since most of his decions are made with relatively good judgement therefor making him a lot more like able in the long run of things. Tho this is coming from a relatively anti-social person so it might not be the best advice.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

It will become evident why Schema didn't give them access pretty soon.

Connor Alexander

Good stuff again! Thanks for the chapter Monsoon!

Pixelblade

Nice bit of introspection going on

MAJmuffin

noice

What I really want to know is why scema didn’t bring the gialgathen into the system adding such a strong race would be a boon to the system. I am think that they are to powerful for the whole race to gain access because the cost of them levelling would be too much of a drain on schamas system. But my theory is most likely wrong due to the fact it’s a universe wide system that can support races from other planets

Monsoon117

It's good to see that writing a brief world history for Giess is paying off.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter and the gialgathen race is becoming more interesting really appreciate the history and now newer dark motives that you write into the gialgathen race.

Monsoon117

No, that's pretty close to correct. I'm basing Daniel's changes on Maslow's hierarchy of needs. He's finally gotten past the basic physiological and safety needs. He's now trying to find a sense of belonging, and he's struggling with stuff he's never had to worry about before. Also, he's guessing there's a quest already made that he can cash in on once he gets to Yildraza. Taking intitiative and all that.

Karolus

Not to nitpick, but Daniel always struck me as more mercenary than this chapter portrays him. He does things either to save himself, his allies/friends, or for cold hard cash. We have not seen a lot of charity from him. Am I missing something?

Sebastian Berobo

Its Tuesday evening, im chilling on my bed doing som light reading, Monsoon releases a new chapter, clench fist, raise it in the air, utter loudly "Fuck Yeah!".

Alex

This chapter promises good things! I'm looking forward to reading this arc! (If you have your introspective comment ready prior to posting you /might/ be able to win first comment)

Monsoon117

So I came up with this new way of organizing my workflow. Needless to say, it's working out pretty damn well so far. This is probably my first, wait, wow Cameron, that was a fast first comment. Anyways, this is my first two day streak of posting chapters in months. Ok, K, that was an equally fast second comment. Guys, I can't even finish my introspective comments. Geez.

Thanks for the chapter

racktrack

#firstgang


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