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165 Skyburner

🕑 Added 2018-10-25 17:25:29 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

His armor regenerates the moment its torn off. He could rip it off, but the metal plates would immediately come back.

Pretentious Slime

Incomes the Gialgathen slayer. Still working on those 18,000papers. Currently going through the most savage of mental battles.

Pretentious Slime

Well he stepped on the already heavy cars side, his foot snapped through it and, well, the car sprang back up in the other direction. Think of pulling a rubber band back far enough that it snaps in half and the one ended flys away. He basically did the same thing with the ugly ass car mansion. Also, yeah I can’t answer why he wasn’t sinking into the ground.

Pretentious Slime

Yet even worse than that, alien math paper work!

crusty pickle

he could have molted his armor like an insect couldnt he?

Pretentious Slime

He said he’s in his element rn .And that he worked out a nice schedual.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Gardor

Maybe you should slow down on releasing too much too quickly, as much as a love reading your stuff I feel like eventually the pace will fall off and I'll get my heart broken. Especially since this may just be cuz of your break.

Gardor

Great fight chapter! You use damn twice in the second paragraph, you say flopped instead of flapped, and you say jolted when I think you mean jogged up to the car. I think this is the first time he's noticed how strong he is. Why'd the car flip over if he broke right through the step? Thanks for addressing the question about him being too heavy for the car though. Also, didn't he like sink into the ground last time he didn't disperse his weight? Also also, I always give a compliment before I start nitpicking so you know I love this story.

Pixelblade

That. Was. Amazing.

Laevus Deus

Thanks for the chapter. Got a good laugh.

Tyler Babcock

Even if he did, which he most likely did at least a level or two, the increase in power wouldn't be even worth the words it would take to describe it.

Call0013

did he get any level up from killing the Skyburner?

Michael Berkowitz

You're doing great! Now feed me MOAR! ^^

Monsoon117

I didn't have stockpile. I'm just planning these out then writing them. I'm outperforming my own expectations to be honest. Feels surreal.

Another great chapter. is this from a stock pile you built up or do you write each chapter every day because it seems each chapter is better than the last

Monsoon117

I was hyped as fuck writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it man.

Monsoon117

He did. Quite a bit.

Monsoon117

They were the same runic inscription, so it's like strength moved up four points then dexterity moved up four. Once both stats were raised equally, that 'round' of the cipher was completed. The strength portion took longer than the dexterity one to complete, but the nature of the inscription ensured they both increased at the same rate. If he chose a solo dexterity rune for the same length of time as a strength one, the dexterity one would increase faster. Hope this helps.

Connor Alexander

Thanks for teh chapter! Torix is back in the limelight, and Daniel is even more of a badass - HE ORBITAL DROPPED THAT SKYBURNER INTO OBLIVION! I was hyped as fuck reading this

Will Nemiroff

If the cipher is most effective at raising his lowest stat then should his dexterity adds from the cipher be greater than his strength additions considering his strength is almost 2.5 times that of his dex? If it is a matter of him having a better image of strength than dexterity so it kind of just evens out, could I suggest just making them slightly different numbers? I believe the last time you listed the cipher gains it was in 157 Fluidity, but i feel like them be exactly the same has been going on for a while.

s476

Thanks for the chapter! Did he level for killing an 9k lvld unknown?

Wildebranch

Fear the most tenacious, dreadful and vile enemy of all high entities in the multiverse. Paperwork.

Monsoon117

Yeah, you get to see Daniel in his element, truly a force of nature and Harbinger of Cataclysm. Seconds later, he's back to being Daniel.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter

Pretentious Slime

Ah, that’s what it was. The thing that made this chapter so neat. The smooth transition into a somewhat light hearted, if not hilarious ending.

Monsoon117

I changed the line of dialogue like this: Daniel says, "I might weigh just a little bit over 20. Nothing too ridiculous."

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

Oh that's definitely a serious concern. One slip up and Daniel can kill a LOT of people. I wanted to make that clear. He's not worrying about his death. He's worrying about becoming a murder.

Monsoon117

This comment is hilarious and insightful.

Pretentious Slime

Oh and a ton is 2,000pounds, so over 20(of I think a ton, wasn’t super specific here) would be over 40,000pounds. Which isn’t really adding up to his stat sheet. I think his last weight was like 270,000pounds or some shit. I don’t remember.

Pretentious Slime

Tho, I would suggest that Daniel find a way to subconsciously manage some of his powers. I mean no one got hurt because they were all strong af, but change the circumstance up a bit, maybe he’s getting on the local imperial bus. Now Daniel is arrested for man slaughter or some shit because of his lack of control over his ability’s.

Pretentious Slime

In the words of lord shaxx(even tho I don’t like destiny) “this is amazing!” For realy though, this is fucking awesome. Daniel turning himself into a literal meteorite, propelling himself and that flame birdy into the earth. Destroying the land, the descriptions of the trees being blown down by the force. Daniel being a little insentive, oblivious to his shear power range. This was just great. So many things I loved about this chapter. And now we get to see him doing math! Normally people would be like, “why is that significant?” Because it can allow him to engineer cooler things and maybe even augument his own ability’s more efficiently! Never thought I would get so excited about Daniel being forced to grade 18,000papers of advanced alien math lol.

Kevin Ramos

Nice

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

Thanks for the chapter.

Monsoon117

No problem my man.

Tyler Babcock

Just got back home from doing my weekly shopping and other things. And I just so happen to see you post this within a minute of me turning on the computer. Thanks for the chapter!

Monsoon117

Legends talk of the one they fear. He is...Gialgathen Born! *buh-buh-buhm, buh-buh-buh.*

Alrigt!!!#2ndgang

xSzakix

#firstgang


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