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167 Thisbey Thorn

🕑 Added 2018-10-27 21:45:54 +0000 UTC

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Pretentious Slime

Just realized, not all battles are the physical type. Thorn is a good example. He is a powerful con artist manipulator. Somewhat like yawm, except in this chapters cercumstances, he’s way below Daniels league. Kinda fun not being the underdogs this time around.

Monsoon117

Ah yeah, a tomb revolving common variations of mental magic and what to do about it.

Monsoon117

Welp, I'm going to tweak the end a bit then. Thank you for letting me know this.

Zachary Smith

loving the story. thisbey was was very oily as kessiah put it, which is good for his character. im looking foward to daniels speech after the tournament

RKieran2

Thanks for the chapter. Do be careful though if you ever publish because the phrase "Let's get ready to rumble" is trademarked.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Joe Websten

Excellent chapters, can’t believe how this stories momentum keeps going. Love your work.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter.

Sebastian Berobo

Thanks for the chapter! Cant wait for Daniel to kick ass in the tourney :D

Tyler Babcock

Thanks for the chapter! Also one thing that I noticed that could be added (a couple sentences at most) would be for Daniel to ask for a small written guide on mental defense/attack when he is asking for the Thermomancy advice. Seeing as how he has a lot on his plate as is, coupled with the fact that his Willpower is already pretty high, he doesn't need to focus on it like a new kind of magic. He did say he should ask him for this already after the frog-dragon mentally talked to him.

Monsoon117

Thanks for bringing up the concepts. I doubt Daniel will go to 15,000 Kelvin plus. Maybe later on. For now he's thinkng more like 2-3 thousand Celsius. Thanks for mentioning the breathing thing. This all gives me good ideas. of what to do with it.

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

If you are planing to take that heat power to the extreme, then I want to point some things out. Him heating up translates into the air around him heating up. At 174,408 degrees Kelvin it is fully Ionized, but it will partly begin to ionize(turn into plasma) at ~15 000 Kelvin witch will begin to make it opaque(you can't see through plasma). But before that it will start to glow(visual problems). Another thing to take note of is that hot gas will expand and therefor become less dense way below that. This will lead to breathing problems I believe. Him heating up with gas in his lungs will also make that gas gain pressure(minor problem for Daniel I believe) and will therefor be expelled as he opens his mouth(tiny detail depending on how fast he heats up). Another thing to note is the second law of thermodynamics. Or roughly that as he becomes hotter then anything around him the heat will begin to transfer faster to the surroundings. But this ether happens through direct contact or radiation(unknown witch wavelength is radiated of Condensed Dimensional Fabric). If his aim where to become hot enough to begin to melt the ground around him it will have to be transferred through radiation as the air he warms up will rise to quickly to properly heat the ground up(as the hot air rises it will be replaced by cool air that will help to keep the ground cold). This means shiny objects gain heat slower as they reflect it(If we are talking about the visual spectrum).

Connor Alexander

Thanks for the chapter! Based on the abilities Daniel has, will he be a living star!

Pretentious Slime

Hype heaven. Just simply can’t wait. Also thermomancy is gonna be fucking awesome. Now he can really crash into the earth like a comit ablaze. Though I wouldn’t recommend it... wonder what the ice portion will do? I mean the heat bit is self expanitory, the cold bit tho? Cools him off, but now that he basically has fire and ice all In one, he could do a lot more than just heat himself up. I can’t wait to see the results.

Monsoon117

Thank you Corwin. Fixed.

Jacob Santos

Depends on the kind of radiation and the amounts. I am waiting on his mastery going up against the old gods.

Corwin Amber

"for a free bost" i think you meant to say 'boost'. thanks for the chapter

Maritropa

Welp, this opinion might not be very popular around here but imo the story could use more alternate PoV chapters, like for example showing Thisbey's inner thoughts about meeting Daniel and the contrast between appearance and attitude, etc. I just find it rather fun seeing an MC through another character's PoV recently

Maritropa

Next upgrade from Thermomancy: Project radiation around yourself and fuck an entire city up by the luxury of standing still (ತ ͜ʖತ)

Monsoon117

Hope you guys find the chapter entertaining. I'm picking up the pace of the story over the next few chapters to cover more ground. I have a lot of story to tell, and I'd rather make the story denser so that it's more engaging. That's the goal at least. Also, let me know what you guys think of Thisbey. I really liked writing him personally.

thanks for the chapter

EitherWay

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