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170 A Nightmare

🕑 Added 2018-10-30 21:23:01 +0000 UTC

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Jeong Ho Lee

Hey what ever happened to perks, because I feel like it hasn't been mentioned in like a couple dozen chapters or used at all. Also great job on the story so far, feels extremely satisfying for Daniel to just make everyone around him feel inadequate.

Monsoon117

Sorry man. Some family came over, and I ended up having to take a long call from someone needing support. It was hard getting myself back to writing after that. I wrote the chapter, but it felt rough, so I didn't post it.

Connor Alexander

Holy fuck yes this was the chapter I was looking for! I'm real late to this release but man is it good. Thanks for the spooky chapter! Also digging the creative horror of the silvers - the caterpillars were terrifying ( > - > )

Kurt A

No halloween horror chapter? I am saddened

s476

Guess I am going to bed without a good night story...seriously though thanks for all the recent chapters

Monsoon117

Naw, still alive'n'stuff.

Pretentious Slime

I really really hope you didn’t die, it only makes sence that after such a long chapter streak, you just up and die. I’m pessimist person at heart so don’t blame me for thinking this way.

Pretentious Slime

In the words of team 4 star’s hellsing abridged Alucard, “Im going to fuck the fear turkey!”

Pretentious Slime

Oh and don’t be afraid to go all out here, this isn’t grimdark for rainbows and pony’s... More like rainbows eating pony’s while said pony’s throwing up acid and blood leaches all over a pile of cute puppys that also happen to have terrible skin cancer.

Pretentious Slime

I just went back and checked Your story on Royal Road, and the people on the latest chapters are like hungry guppy’s. Chapter spamming is like an early christmas to them lol.

Pretentious Slime

But just think about the people on royal road 😂

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Just keeps getting better.

Monsoon117

Aye, somebody noticed.

Pixelblade

'The sunset as I stumbled' -> 'The sun set' Edit: did Daniel just set up a date for Torix?

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

These rewards are on top of the previous ones.

I think it has been great so far. I would be much more annoyed by the cliff hanger if it wasn't for your new release rate

Thanks for the chapter. What happend to the guild branch reward?

Monsoon117

I was never afraid to try different styles. After taking hard look at my previous content, I tried implementing three things in my new work, The New World: 1st, enhance readability. It was too metaphorical and confusing. It muddled the 'punch' of the story and characters. 2nd, Tension in the plotline. I wanted to write a page turner that kept people reading. 3rd, I wanted a main character that people could relate too. Looking back, I did pretty well on those three goals.

Hana Buechel

LOVE this chapter. Great input of our harbinger learning he needs a switch to face the horrors. Can’t wait for more awesome abominations to show up, and horror worlds descriptions!

I can't really tell it's the same writer, at least not from what I remember.

Mason Sudul

Put as much as you want man your really good at getting as gory as possible while making it seem appropriate

Kurt A

also "won't fight them until the eldritch or silvers in most circumstances"?

Monsoon117

So, the story is really picking up pace now. I hope the sense of suspense is really ramping up at this point. I didn't really plan this out either, but it looks like there will be some horror on Halloween. I've always wondered this, but as readers, what do you guys think of the graphic material? I love writing it because I enjoy horror movies and exploring the darker corners of the human conscious. My previous work, Monsters Dwell in Men, reveled in it. I try to be tactful with how I use it now, but let me know what you guys think about it. I know I go overboard sometimes.

Alex

#sadsecond

Kurt A

dang it

Grayson

Knock knock

racktrack

#firstgang


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