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172 Leaving an Impression
🕑 Added 2018-11-02 22:11:21 +0000 UTCTorix nodded his head, "He is quite resilient."
Tohtella sighed, "Then if you all agree with his plan, I will trust in your competence as a whole."
Torix turned to me, "I will blanket the landing position with darkness. This will prevent us from luring in a horde of angry silvers."
A message popped up in front of me,
Torix Worm, of Darkhill(Giess: 3/04/26) - It will hide your identity. I will give another spare suit of armor. Put it on before you leave the magic field.
I grinned, holding down a laugh, "Alright, sounds like a good idea to me."
Tohtella gave us a curt nod, "I'll organize the necessary medical supplies for treating the yana infestations. The slaves will need immediate detox and surgical treatments."
I frowned, "That was something I've meant to ask. How are the slaves able to live there? I saw them eating that sludge. There's no way they should be alive."
Tohtella bit her lip. She adjusted her glasses, "Part of my work involves researching the silvers. One of the most reliable sources of information involves old legends from gialgathens."
She waved a hand, "Particularly in regards to the yana worms. Gialgathens view yana as mythical, terrifying creatures. They are one of the only silvers that can threaten gialgathens. Though it isn't widely known, the highest punishment in gialgathen culture involves the yana."
Tohtella jotted something on her notes, "They would infest a traitor with the worms and throw them deep into silver territory with clipped wings. This is a slow death sentence, one where the beast loses its mind as the yana take over."
I grimaced. The first zombie gialgathen I fought on Giess was a result of that punishment. Well, probably.
Tohtella continued, "They learned several characteristics about the yana during those punishments. The host feeds the yana sludge. The yana then excretes nutrients in turn. My own findings verified this."
Althea shook her head, "That's disgusting."
Torix nodded, "Indeed it is, but it's useful information. Are the gialgathens doing this as well?"
Tohtella shook her head, "There metabolisms can tolerate silver flesh despite it being loaded with toxins."
I raised my eyebrows, "Wow. Alright then, well that's even more reason to kill the Skyburners then."
One of the bottom floor doors opened. Kessiah walked out, her veil covering her. Tohtella turned to her. After a few seconds, her gaze turned sharp,
"You didn't tell me that you had another revenant with you?"
Kessiah raised a hand, "Yo, who are you?"
Tohtella crossed her arms, "I'm Tohtella Adair. You may call me Miss Adair."
Kessiah rolled her eyes, "Ok Miss Adair. I'm Kessiah Crow. Looks like you saw through my disguise right away. Sucks I had to put it on."
Tohtella adjusted her glasses, "It's due to your low level."
Kessiah tilted her head, "Low is a little harsh, don't you think?"
Tohtella raised a hand to her, "No. It's not. The Crow clan is famous for their physical augmentations and Blood Arts. Not even level 3,000 is a travesty considering your birth."
Kessiah crossed her arms, walking in front of Tohtella, "Oh, so you know a thing or two?"
Tohtella raised her head, her chin high, "Yes. I do know quite a bit, like how you're a rather bitter disappointment."
I turned to Tohtella and snapped,
"Kessiah's a friend. You shit on her, then you're shitting on me. Understand?"
Tohtella glared up at me. She sighed, composing herself, "It's...I'm sorry. Please excuse me."
Tohtella waved her hands, "This discussion is over either way. We've formulated a plan. I will go about handling the details. Will tonight work for you all?"
We nodded. I kept my gaze on Tohtella as she walked out. As the door closed, I turned to Kessiah, "Any idea where that came from?"
Kessiah shrugged, "I don't know. She's got problems though, that's for sure."
Torix sighed, "It's best we do not assume much. Now, I'll go prepare the necessary scrolls, gems, and supplies. You all do as you will."
Althea stood up, weaving between furniture to me. She wrapped her hands around me, "Hey big guy. That was sexy standing up to her like that."
I smiled at her, "Eh, I try."
Althea raised her eyebrows, "Oh, wait a minute. Did you forget what today is?"
I creased my brows, "Er, maybe."
Althea smirked, "I'll give you a hint...tournament."
I smacked my facemask, "Oh fuck. I completely forgot."
I hugged Althea, "Sorry, got to go."
She giggled, "Try not to crash through a wall getting there."
I opened my dimensional storage. I tore open three packs of rations, pouring them down my throat. I tossed the bags into the garbage, running outside. I dashed into the elevator, tapping my foot with impatience. After reaching the bottom, I leaped over a crowd of people in the lobby.
After swishing through the doors, I pulled myself up over the crowds with magic. I floated over the hordes of espens and aliens, reaching the stadium in seconds. I ran inside, running out the bleachers. I looked around, finding the seating for combatants.
I jumped over the crowd, keeping myself light with a touch of gravity magic. I landed in my previous chair. I leaned back into my seat, opening my status. I checked the tournament rankings online with my obelisk. I tilted my head back, sinking into my chair with relief. There was still a fight left before I was up.
As I relaxed, Eradin shouted at me from afar, "Here I believed you might miss our fated duel?"
I shook my head, "Almost. I had some business to take care of earlier today."
Eradin chuckled, "Good. I hope you're ready for a friendly thrashing."
I laughed back, "Only if you are too."
I watched the next fight while keeping my eyes closed. This trained Hunter of Many. At the same time, I heated and cooled my favorite chunk of orichalcum. Putting myself under some stress, I trained my mental skills at the same time as well.
With all that going on, the fight in front of me dragged on forever. Two fighters like Jilian fought one another. They both unloaded hundreds of shells at each other. I tuned it out after half an hour, focusing on my own skills.
My mind wandered as I adapted to the mental stress. The entire tournament progressed oddly. It wasn't straightforward with one person versus another. It involved an intricate set of branches, each designed for an outcome.
For example, every gialgathen began the tournament by fighting another gialgathen. This halved the pool of gialgathens that other combatants had to face. Whoever organized the competition did everything they could to make the gialgathens lose.
I stopped my exercises, ready for my next fight. I scrolled through the previous tournament's rosters. For the last decade, every one of them involved gialgathens facing each other exclusively. This meant only one gialgathen fought on into the upper ranks of the tourney.
I frowned at it. It was a biased schedule that tried eliminating the gialgathens. The gialgathens were so strong, however, that it didn't work. A Breaker would need to join the tournament to win. I doubted many of them found the time between completing bounties.
I closed my status, irritated at whoever ran this thing. I sighed, calming myself and readying myself for the next fight. Mental Preparation leveled up as one of the gunmen collapsed from exhaustion. Kiki Mosk raised a hand,
"And that is Kelevar's defeat. Give a hand to Moisc!"
Next to no one cheered. For once, I sympathized with the crowd's reaction. Neither fighter stood a chance against a gialgathen. They wasted the crowd's time with an hour-long bout of boredom. It let me level a few skills at least.
With the snooze fest over, Kiki Mosk raised a hand, "And now for the final four fights for the Yildraza sector. After this, the winner will go on to compete against the best of the best in Giess's oldest city, Choria! There, the tournament's victor will be decided."
He gestured towards me, "We have an exhibition of talent on display today. We have the unstoppable Daniel Hillside, a newcomer with a brutal reputation of dominance."
A light flashed over me. I sighed, going through the motions of raising my hand and riling up everybody. Kiki continued,
"He'll be fighting four combatants in a row today to test if he's as invincible as they say! After all, the true test of a fighter is overcoming adversity."
I rolled my shoulders. If I were struggling, I'd call bullshit on this kind of thing. As if though, I counted my blessings. This meant I didn't need to spend forever waiting for my fights anymore. I could finish this in one hour if I hurried.
I jumped into the arena, clasping my fists. Kiki roared out, "And he looks like he's itching for a fight! The first combatant will be the winner of the last bout, Moisc!"
He didn't even announce his last name. Covered in gray power armor. He got back onto the arena's stage, still out of breath from his last fight. It sucked he had to fight me while exhausted. I'd win either way, but he couldn't give his best. As a guy who's competed before, I sympathized.
As we faced each other, I gave him a short bow. He did the same. I raised a hand and shouted, "Sorry you have to fight like this."
He shrugged, "Eh, I knew I wasn't winning the tournament anyway. I'm just here for the experience. I got further than I ever expected anyway."
I liked his positive attitude. Kiki Mosk raised a hand, "Are both combatants ready?"
We nodded. Kiki swung his hand down. I stomped the ground, lifting a panel of stone between Moisc and I. With Hunter of Many, I tracked his location from behind cover. I raised a foot, kicking forward. I extended my reach with telekinesis, busting his shielding.
Moisc already fired at me, unlatching a grenade. I thumped the projectile with telekinesis. The bomb smacked the forcefield around the arena, letting out a vibrant, blue fire. With crowd letting out a cheer, I kicked again, shattering Moisc's secondary mana shield.
Moisc opened his dimensional storage, his desperation building. Before he pulled something out, I launched a short uppercut. A telekinetic pulse smashed into his gut, knocking him upwards. Spit flopped out of his mouth as he couldn't breathe.
He tumbled from above, stunned and gasping for air. I caught him with a gravity well. At the same time, I kicked the block of stone between us back onto the arena. Kiki raised his eyebrows,
"Yeesh, that must of hurt. On to Daniel's next opponent!"
Moisc's breath returned to him as the medics came up. He let them carry him out on a hovering stretcher. My next opponent flew up from the stands, a large gialgathen. He wore armor over his neck and chest. With red skin and black spots, he glared at me. He growled,
"Filthy dirtwalker. You will not play with me as you did Alzoroth."
I nodded, "You're right. I won't. I don't have time too."
He narrowed his eyes. He breathed in as Kiki raised a hand, "Are both combatants prepared!"
We gave the nod, the gialgathen still breathing deep. Kiki raised a fist, "Then go!"
I snapped a kick upwards, hitting a telekinetic panel. A portion of the force converted, hitting the gialgathen's chin as he breathed fire at me. The green flame dispersed on the arena's invisible barrier, creating a light show. The crowd boomed out, in awe at the display of light and power.
I wasted no time. As the gialgathen's breath sputtered out, I reached out a hand. I jerked the gialgathen's head towards me, accentuating my pull with gravity. His head whipped down while I launched myself upwards. I lifted my knee, landing the blow flush on his jaw.
My armor creaked as the bones in his face cracked. Several of his teeth shattered, tumbling against the arena. Knocked out cold, his head flopped to his side. I caught it, preventing him from suffering more damage. As I set him down, the crowd went quiet.
Even Kiki looked affected. He pulled at his collar, "Well...that was something." A drop of cold sweat fell down his face, "Ahem, the winner!"
The throngs of supporters burst into applause, giving me a standing ovation. I gave them a wave while lifting the gialgathen out of the arena with magic. Medics tended to his injuries while I cracked my neck. I growled, "Come on. Who's next?"
Kiki raised his eyebrows, "The next victim is a veteran of the tournament. We have Eradin Forest-Torch!"
Eradin flew up into the arena. As he landed, the old beast sighed, "And here I believed I might win Yildraza's selection this year."
I shrugged, "You can still win."
He shook his head, a toothy grin on his face, "I do have two eyes, young one. What they just saw gave me a clear message."
His tail whipped behind him, picking up speed as he continued, "Eradin, you should've retired before this last fight."
I raised my hands, "Eh, we'll see."
Kiki Mosk raised a hand, "Are both combatants ready?"
We nodded. Kiki swung his arm down, "Then begin!"
I gave Eradin a bow, and he returned the favor. The crowd booed, wanting more drama. I rolled my eyes as I charged mana. Eradin stepped forward, whipping his tail towards me. I slammed my arm into his attack, knocking it down onto the arena.
The arena crumbled, a plume of white powder rising. Eradin flicked his tail slamming it towards me again. I detonated my runes, dashing forward as he did. Eradin pierced deep into the arena as I bolted towards his face. With momentum behind me, I slammed my fist into his face
The old gialgathen's head whipped back. He stumbled, still conscious. Eradin's eyes glazed over as he fell. He crashed off the arena, a clash of sound rippling out. He tried getting back up, but he was too disoriented. I looked up, waiting for Kiki to end the fight.
He didn't.
The crowd chanted, "Finish him. Finish him. Finish him." The old gialgathen shook his head, getting a sense of where he was. He looked around, his eyebrows creased. I waved my hand, shouting at Kiki,
"Just end the fight already. Eradin doesn't even know where he is."
Kiki shook his head, "He can still battle. Just listen to the crowd."
Kiki grinned, a sinister edge in his voice. I frowned as Eradin locked eyes with me. He stared a for a moment before his huge eyes widened. He glanced down,
"I...I lost, didn't I?"
I nodded. Eradin raised a wing, letting out a mental shout, "I surrender. He has beaten me. Honor to him and his clan."
The crowd booed, their hatred for the gialgathens coming out. A few people shouted,
"Where's the blood?"
"I wanted to see some more missing teeth."
"He's crushed dozens of espens with his bullshit tail. He has it coming!"
The crowd's reaction disgusted me. A few people tried throwing food and drinks at Eradin while he was down. I shot out a wave of gravity, slamming the food back into the arena.
This shit was getting old fast.
Kiki sighed, "Well, it's well within tournament regulations to surrender."
He raised a hand to me, "To the victor!"
The crowd changed on a dime, giving me an enormous hoopla. The mob repulsed me at this point. I just wanted to win the mythical compendium then get out of here. All this easy fame and status came from their hatred of gialgathens. My integrity wouldn't let me accept it.
With those thoughts swirling in my head, the crowd calmed back down. Kiki raised another hand, "And now we have the final fight for the Yildraza sector. The last gialgathen and last year's winner, give a hand for Derlilath, Lady Of The Yellow!"
A chorus of boos echoed out as a yellow gialgathen flapped her wings. Old and muscled, she landed in front of me. She almost glowed with energy, her armor encrusted with gemstones. She grinned at me, her voice commanding,
"It's good to see they've brought a worthy warrior this year."
I grinned back, "Likewise."
Unlike the others, she looked like a serious challenge, so I analyzed her,
Delilath, Lady of Yellow(lvl 10,031 | Unknown Status) - Once a general of Lehesion's army, Delilath worked as one of the gialgathen's most powerful mages. She's placed in the top five of the tournament for the last seven years since she's decided to compete.
Though she once fought to help the espens, public opinion turned against her. Numerous campaigns by prominent figures such as Thisbey Thorn or Azakus Riola ruined the reputation of Lehesion's followers. With rumormongering and propaganda, they've turned Delilath from a celebrated hero to a scorned symbol.
Regardless of her affiliation with politics, Delilath's competence in battle is undeniable. She wields ancient magics only known by the gialgathens. By drawing mana from her surroundings, she opens up her own mana pool to enhance her tail swipes. This combination of control-oriented sorcery and physical ferocity makes her threatening to almost anyone.
Be careful and tread with caution.
I smiled, my blood boiling at her status. This would be an actual fight, and that prospect excited me to no end. I pounded my fists together, denting my gray armor and letting out an echo. Delilath channeled her energy, soft, yellow spheres forming around her.
Dozens of yellow stars formed beside her, a sweet-smelling wind rushing over me. I followed suit, charging up my own mana. The air around us saturated with energy, our auras intermingling. Sparks of red lightning shot from me, my blood permeated with volatile energy.
Kiki backed away, raising his eyebrows, "Well, both combatants look as though they want to tear each other apart."
A happy grin grew over his face, "Excellent! Are both combatants ready?"
With her chin held high, Delilath nodded. I shook my fists, mana saturating my frame. Kiki laughed, "I'll take that as a yes."
He swung his hand down, "Let the battle to decide who represents Yildraza begin!"
Comments
alexander julian
The giaglethens magic sounds really cool. Also Daniels attitude to the race relations makes me think its possible he could win the respect of their society or something? Become an honorary frog dragon?
alexander julian
I agree that is weirdly socially adept given how his whole shtick in terms of weaknesses is that he's really uncharasmatic/everyone is scared horrified by him. In saying that it's not like people a aren't. For example Kiki in this chapter. And him being empathetic while new is showing A. That he is developing from all the internal conflict he's from fucking people over on Earth. B it shows that not being in yawms hell and being with Althea let's him act more kindly: being empathetic to Torix, minimising harm to his opponents
Xepen
On A similar note, I know that it was previously said that Monsoon was going to try and “redeem” Kessiah, however I can’t say I like the way it’s happening. The way she’s helped and “redeemed” herself feels really out of place even if she was like that the whole time, being some kinda undercover protected for the rest of the crew. I wasn’t going to say anything until Daniel massive reaction to an insult towards her, which just felt really weird, yea she’s done some things to help, but sadly, it just felt... out of place? To me at least. If it was for Althea or Torix, maybe even Hod it’d be a little different, I guess I kinda personally separated Kessiah a little from the rest of the group
Scott Keesler
Dang it man, I got excited because I thought you made a really good pun. The title is “leaving an impression” and I thought that the impression would be the massive crater made by Daniel when he slams like a meteorite into the ground. Oh well, anyways, keep up the good work man! These chapters are so good. I do think that ja nein has a really good point tho. I was kinda getting that vibe as well when Daniel was basically being a perfect human and stuff. Not bad, just a warning. This is ten chapters behind, but feedback is good anyways I guess. I digress, keep it up!
Royce Gunter
"Tohtella shook her head, "There metabolisms can tolerate silver flesh despite it being loaded with toxins."" Their* metabolisms....
Highfist
eh i agree with Tortilla on the topic of Kessiah
Monsoon117
That;s for sure. Schema's descriptions will often have something like, "This being's strength exceeds its level. etc," though.
Pretentious Slime
That makes a lot more sence, but I find it hard to believe that danial will only ever fight (and kill) Eldritch.
Monsoon117
I think that level of insight is more than the level system was ever intended to convey on a person to person basis. For eldritch, the growth rate is taken into consideration when trying to take them down. This is because the exp reward has to be consistent. Schema isn't as particular with people because you're not supposed to be killing people for the most part.
Alex R
That's more why I said beat than stronger than. Daniel isnt close to as strong as some of the stronger people in Schemas universe but his ability to tank damage is probably one of the highest if not the highest. You arent going to outlast him but you can two shot him.
Pretentious Slime
I have a hard time seeing danial split the sea with his current prowess. His more astounding capability’s come mainly from his rediculous amounts of health and regeneration as well as mana (which happens to be directly connected to his health.) so he may not be able to split the ocean, but he doesn’t exactly need to if he’s practically unkillable. (Not entirely but very hard to kill)
Pretentious Slime
Another PS: I was low balling Danials immortal scale status. But was also high balling Danials Harbinger status.
Pretentious Slime
PS: immortal- 3, would mean that danial is 10,000 times greater at not dyeing then your average immortal enemy(at danials level)in schemas level system. Also, immortal could mean that you just Regen faster then your body dies in the long run. So, arguably, there are tons of immortals in the world that monsoon created.
Pretentious Slime
FYI: this scale, like the Richter scale, only reaches lvl 10.
Pretentious Slime
To some that scaleing could be very sygnifant and might even diswade them from trying anything with Danial.
Pretentious Slime
This can also be more broad when considering all of the abnormal foes ability’s. I can imagine that Danials would probably be something very vague and ominous. Say: Harbinger- 4
Pretentious Slime
This would probably be some sort of highly advanced perception skill available to high level bounty hunters or something close. But I also think it would be nice to add in schemas descriptions when danial is fighting some abnormal foe.
Pretentious Slime
A very good example would be: The Harbinger _ Immortal-3 _ (Insert scaleling) _
Pretentious Slime
Allow me to explain. The system I thought up was made so that it would be easy figuring out exactly how strong someone like Danial was(in relations to everyone else at Danials level). Each level of this scale is 10times greater then the last. The first, ten times greater then what is considered ‘normal’ according to schemas level system standards.
Pretentious Slime
Richter scale, except it will be named something entirely different and based off something entirely fictional. I have created a scaling system that is quite adaptable and is exclusive towards anomolys like Danial.
Pretentious Slime
It’s like goku and power levels and how they never mattered because goku would always constantly get stronger. Why not rate an enemy on how likely they are to out pace you instead? Development speed should be more of a deciding factor.
Monsoon117
He's a legendary figure, so he'd be tough to say the least.
s476
He is said to fight against an army of skyburners, while daniel didnt want to engage 10at a time (+general)..so I think daniel is weaker atm
Alex R
Was Lehesion strong enough to beat Daniel? And if not could he beat Althea?
Pretentious Slime
There’s also the fact that Danial has been VERY smart with his build. Taking advantage of what has been given to him over time. It’s because of this that he can fairly have a lower level and still take on higher level enemy’s. People who can do this, I think, should be called anomolys. But also shouldn’t be judged on levels by anyone.
Pretentious Slime
Well to put it shortly, Danial, Althea, Yawm. These people are very much anomolys in Schemas leveling system and therefore shouldn’t be judged in strength based off lvl alone. I think schema never originally accounted for anomolys when he made the leveling system. I say this because the leveling system can more accurately deduce a NORMAL persons strength but fails to with Danial or Althea’s.
Monsoon117
That's happened to me before. Try not to go over 300 words with the comments. I wish I'd seen them though.
Monsoon117
Oh no, of course not. Thank you for letting me know. It's always good to get feedback. Gives me an idea of where to improve and whatnot.
Pretentious Slime
Maybe my comment was too long?
Pretentious Slime
I keep trying to make a comment but they for some reason won’t stay.
MattMick222
<a href="http://gravitytales.com/vote" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://gravitytales.com/vote</a> The New World is 11th ranked story lets get him into top 10
Monsoon117
They come from a byproduct of mana pollution. It will be elaborated as more is revealed about the silvers further on in the arc.
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter. Looks like someone who might be interested in helping against the Skyburners.
ja nein
It was never my intention to hurt you nor did i mean to suggest it has already been going down. All i feared that it could develop that way. While alot of the story has been Daniel struggling against huge odds, i do like where he is now power wise, a true harbringer and being able to dominate his enemies, since it was hard earned might. What i meant was more his character development. For example : That scene with torix where he was worried about being useless. Daniel was extremely empathatic there, which was never a trait i associated with him, nor something he was very gifted in. Or him feeling as witty as the speaker lady (whatwashername thote something). I think he needs to keep some of his rough edges in his character, without being too smooth all over. mind you this is just the opinion of one of your countless readers. But youre the author and you write the story. I really hope i am not giving you a sleepless night with this.
Connor Alexander
Thanks for that explanation, it was clarifying. Good to see it is consistent, and bring those details back up helps me see what you mean. Another question about the ecology: since both of the (recognised) sentient races on this planet are amphibious does that mean that the planet is rather tropical due to the mana everywhere? And were those massive seas of filth originally healthy seas, or were those formed by the silver’s expansion?
Monsoon117
I thought about this comment a lot, and I can totally see where you're coming from. It kind of physically hurt to read honestly. I really never wanted to write out a mary sue kind of character. In this case, by showing Daniel developing himself, he's outpaced everyone around him. The difference definitely has led to a power /competence gap that's hard to work with. I intend on using that power against Daniel though, so I hope that raises your spirits about the story's development.
Monsoon117
There's two real reasons mentioned wayyy back when I brought up Giess. It's been months, so I can't really blame you guys for forgetting. First you have the silvers. There not as exponential as the eldritch, but they are a serious problem. They offer a large, endless supply of high level monsters to kill to rapidly level up. The second reason is that mana saturates Giess to its core. There were several chapters early on in Icosah mentioning how they used mana to supply vehicles and other basic supplies. While they passed over the forest of Giess, the same mechanic played out. This is why creatures like Gialgathens have come about. Creatures feed on mana, then creatures eat those mana charged creatures. Once you reach the top of the food chain, you end up with the gialgathens, very ancient and powerful creatures with tons of energy at their disposal. I hope this makes sense.
Connor Alexander
Thanks for the chapter Monsoon! I’m finding that the power creep is rather strong on this planet (credit to Pixelblade for pointing it out). Is this a symptom of a planet becoming a fringe world or a case of a volatile ecosystem on a rather exotic planet?
ja nein
hey loving your story since the moment you started it on rrl. But currently i feel as if our Mc starts to become a little like all those japanese light novel heroes. He is developing to be a little Mary Sue, basically being adept at everything and always saying the right things, basically having no faults. I would hate to see this story going down because of these reasons. This is just my personal opinion. Awaiting that epic fight scene next chap :)
Pixelblade
Something's been bothering me for a while now. In chapter 145: "Let Loose" Torix mentions that the highest level creature on Giess is about level 6500, yet we've consistently seen levels way higher than that. Is this a mistake or am I missing something?
Monsoon117
There's other stuff I have going on in the background. Just wait and see. I'm also really glad you're enjoying the other parts though too.
Zachary Smith
loving the arc. i really like how u intersperse the whole tournament with a second plot, the silvers. it keeps the tournament type arc from feeling drawn out, super long, or boring! perfect
Pixelblade
Aw man I thought the title was referring to Daniel leaving an impression on the ground with his meteor drop. I even chuckled at the pun! How cruelly you trick us.
Jess Koch
I think he wants to rip the crowd apart.
Alex R
Damm Tohtella ripped Kessiah a new one. Deservedly but damn. Second when Daniel wins the tournament he is going to rip the organizers apart.
Maritropa
Haha, next chapter should be called *Wham. bam, thank you ma'am*
Alex
It's evil what you're doing, writing such good chapters and leaving them on such dramatic cliffhangers 😭 who taught you how to write, Scheherazade???
Monsoon117
Eh, i can take that part out. I added it during editing so it didn't sound sudden.
Zeal Iskander
"I almost interjected, but I wanted to let Kessiah handle it. " but exactly two sentences later...
Monsoon117
Hope you guys enjoy the chapter. I've got a few awesome fights lined up, and I cannot wait to write them out. Let me know if you enjoying the arc as well.
Jess Koch
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