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182 A Masked History

🕑 Added 2018-12-06 04:21:28 +0000 UTC

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Ted Burgess

Poorly written digression. How did Daniel turn into a raging Misogynist after 180 chapters? That didn’t make sense, and was wildly incongruent with how you’ve written your character previously.

Xwaderman

damn should be dam i think

Xepen

He uses origin mana to emulate the wind moving between his hands, obviously

Shannon Smith

It could say something along the lines of "Most people want to make an impact on their world. You've taken it a tad too literally".

Scott Keesler

Super tiny thing that’s not important to the story, how does Torix clap? Clapping is done by air escaping between two hands that have skin, but he’s just bones. Just a curious inquiry

Shannon Smith

Why hasn't he gotten an impact skill yet? He parkoured down a street and got a unique skill, but surviving reentry and leveling kilometers with his landing isn't enough?

Shannon Smith

I'm still surprised he hasn't by now. I've been waiting for him to get something that increases the impact or reduces the damage he takes.

JewBot9000

"When the next horror does come, I'll ready." Should be "When the next horror does come, I'll be ready." Sounds correct this way.

Jacob Santos

RNGesus is worst and best Jesus.

K

once per year

How often does this story update?

Peacock

He's gonna get a Meteorite skill, right? Given its power, does it become a mythical skill?

Monsoon117

I tried making it feel 'real.' It's good to see some people can relate to this scenario.

Alex R

History is written by the victor and Lehesion was the victor. So hell look good to everyone else.

Gabriel

I normally don't like relationship focus chapters but I found this done well. As someone who has had conversations quite similar to the chapter. Though not because I work to much. :P

Alexander Dupree

"I'll ready" should be "I'll be ready"

Steven Vollmert

Thanks for the chapter. Is there a release date for the book?

Magnus Gullhav Leikvik

I like how different people say different things about the history. It is not like every body says the truth and all have their own agenda. It makes for a contradicting story telling but it makes it feel more real at the same time. This also explain why the speaker thought they had to tell that Lehesion had returned, but Daniel thought it would be wrong. Whit this information and what it might imply she might have been right. After all the Gilatons(or what their name was) does not have access to the Shema and can't write there. If that is where Daniel read about it he might have read a bunch of biased stuff. And thanks for the chapter.

Idan tal

Great chapter. Shows why the dragons think the silver is good for the planet

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

I don't know how that defeats the purpose, really. He still would be taking a break, it'd just be scheduled.

Alex R

I'm confused about the title's relevance to the chapter. It doesnt seem to fit like how your others do. But other than that Iiked it, hit the argument between the two of them pretty well.

BrauBaer

Thanks for the chapter

Kevin Ramos

Nice

thanks for the chapter, Also surprised that Daniel didn't just tell Althea that she gets one day/night out of the week just the two of them? I know that defeats the purpose of Althea's concern but it would be a complete Daniel think to do :)

Monsoon117

1# Thisbey is selling this point, and Daniel hasn't openly refuted it since it helps disguise his identity. 2# In reality, they're quite far apart. In a leveling sense, they're not so far apart, however. That's why Daniel doesn't think he's as ahead of his friends as he actually is. His abilities are far less specialized, giving him a massive advantage over Althea in most scenarios. The class Althea gained is also why he thinks they aren't so far apart.

Sebas Tian

That being said interesting chapter!

Sebas Tian

I do have two questions 1# why do people think he is espen? or has that already been addressed and I missed it. 2# WHY is Althea still as/almost as strong as Daniel? That's one of my only current issues is how she for some reason keeps up. I mean Daniel has the same if not more OP abilities/growth mechanics as Althea and he works at least 2x as much. I know she needs to basically keep up to Daniel but it feels like that's the only reason. Although I may have missed things.

Monsoon117

I tried some new stuff in this chapter. Let me know if it was off base or the like.

Alex R

Nope

Jess Koch

First

EitherWay

Noice


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